If this isn't the most interesting story every then I don't know what is. I'll just hold down the F5 button and hope for the best.

Hmm, I'm intrugued. Let's see what happens next.

Your going a bit fast

This has definitely caught my interest and now I find myself eager to find out more.

I'm confused

And she was eaten. The End!

Quite interesting, but too sparse to warrant excess criticism/praise.

You got my attention, do not dissapoint..

Humm very intriguing. Not much to go on the fat pace is accapltable given that's its from the point of view from tea leaves in the basket. You've caught my attention. It seems this takes place in the future since spike is a grown dragon.
What is this blessing? This could get smutty very, very smutty.
You have our attention do not disappoint.

you have my interest