A Old Friend Back In Town

by The Amazing Horse Man

Authors Notes

I lied, the story ends here. I know it was a extremely short story. I just had no where to go. Maybe I'll write a epilogue. But I got plain ol' nothing. I start a new story, with more plot. This was a first story. So don't be so mad that it ended so abruptly. The next few stories I'll write will have much more plot and words. I hope you enjoyed this merry little Story, but I have new ideas to think.

Thank You, Good Night.
MyLittleGecko28

Comments

[Cavalryunit001]

Well, sir (or ma'am, forgive me if I have guessed your gender wrong), I must say, although short, I found your work very entertaining I see that you have great potential in writing stories of this genre; if you had put more effort into it, it would've no doubt rivaled even ROBCakeran53's "My Little Dashie", by far one of the best fanfiction stories ever concieved by any human being. I was very displeased that the story was so short, for you displayed such great talent in the first few sentences that I was eager to read more of it, even if it meant waiting a few more days. Still, you made a valiant effort to make this story as exciting as you can, and thus, as a fellow writer, I applaud you for your work. I do hope you make good on your word to do better in the future - you show great promise, my friend.

[The Amazing Horse Man]

1766703 Thanks a lot. I am a guy FYI, but thanks. I need ideas for a new story. If you could help I'll be as happy as Derpy in a mountain of muffins.

[Kira]

1766797

If you seek assistance for your plot troubles, then I would be glad to help! Anything story related you need, don't hesitate to ask! Good story, by the way.

1766703

Not sure if sincere, or just being super nice. Either way, I agree. He has a very high potential for this sub-category of writing and, with more time put into them, his stories could become featured, easily. So, good job, random reviewer guy, and excellent use of emoticons!