Wingplay? Wingplay! You magnificent beast. My inner xenophile is standing up and cheering. Insta-faved.

And in a well-written story with plot, no less. I am quite pleased to see that you've got a back catalogue of stories I can skim through later.

I -loved- the wingplay in this chapter, and I really like where you're going with Dash's 'wishlist' of what kinda pony she wanted. I'm more than a little excited to read chapter 3 and see what's next in this story =)

This is a truly excellent story; wonderfully written and with a whole lot of emotion between the lines.

Oh, sweet Celestia... I hadn't even thought much about wings. But this chapter hnnnnnggggg-

real nice is enjoyed it

I'll never look at a feather duster the same way again

me and you both

damn it ever time i see my feather duster i think what little secrets it has and what it does when im not around

--"...But you were so good, and I kinda got carried away, and now you must think I'm a loser 'cause I paid my best friend to have sex with me.”--

Yet another excellent quote for my collection.

MMM, feathers and wings...