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Great story, have a face and a mustache.:moustache:

...Like eeet!

Expertly done O

I just knew we could trust you to make a great story with such a sensitive plot.
Pun intended.

That's a mighty fine story you got there :ajsmug:

This is very well written and the sensitive subject of professional sex work is handled delicately. Even though I've only read the first chapter, good for you. You've got a nice story going here.

Wait, where's reigdar :twilightoops:
Haha Reigdar, beat you :trollestia:

Back to topic. Not time to read now, so set to read later. Trust me i wil :twilightsmile:

1794130 LOL :rainbowlaugh:
Didn't state i was first (ok, i might have implied that i was early), i just stated you were unusually late :pinkiehappy:
Good to have you here Reigdar :twilightsmile:

Did you wait for a chance to use that? :facehoof:

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Art Inspired made it for me.

An hypothrtically awesome story. PS: I just realized you were the awesome author of all those awesome stories. PPS: I absolutely need a next chapter, I HAVE to know what the others said.

Congratulations! This is the final story I needed to round out the 'Stories With/About Clop That You Should Really Read, Even If You Really Aren't All That In To Clop' box on my page! :ajsmug:

looks interesting.

Surprisingly enjoyable. And strange.

Now, I'm not a huge fan of it, but I have read clop before, both some of the decent stories and some of the bad ones. And a few of those utterly atrocius ones which are impossible to actually finish. This was the first genuinely good clop story I've read though. As in, the story itself was quite good indeed and the clop added to it, rather than the opposite. :ajsmug:

I wouldn't call this clop at all, it's far more in the realm of erotica. There's an honest story to it (and not because AJ's in it, heh), romance, some delightfully silly bits (omg, Pinkie opening a brothel, that must be written someday), and of course, sex. Bravo! 5 out of 5 stars.

fantastic fic foo

I agree with both above statements. This seemed more like a story with clop added to it then an all out clop fic. Really nice story. Also the Pinkie brothel seems like a good idea.

As in, the story itself was quite good indeed and the clop added to it, rather than the opposite.

I wouldn't call this clop at all, it's far more in the realm of erotica. There's an honest story to it

I agree with both above statements. This seemed more like a story with clop added to it then an all out clop fic. Really nice story.

Isn't story focus great? :scootangel:

Wingplay? Wingplay! You magnificent beast. My inner xenophile is standing up and cheering. Insta-faved. :twilightblush:

And in a well-written story with plot, no less. I am quite pleased to see that you've got a back catalogue of stories I can skim through later.

This was truly magnificent. Both emotionally and sexually, I really enjoyed the read. Made me feel all warm and fuzzy in the end. It was also an entirely new take on Rainbow Jerk, who is, I'm not ashamed to admit it, my least favourite character. However, imagining her like she is in this story... it makes her way more relatable and sweet.

Thank you for sharing this wonderful tale with us!

Whelp, this first chapter has exceeded all expectations. I expected immediate sex, then I expected a slow build up to it when Applejack admitted to being pegasexual, then I expected some experimentation to happen when they both mentioned not having had any in a while, but you're building up to something I suspect will be -fantastic-

By the time you read this comment, I'll be starting chapter 2 =)

You know what? This story is so cool that needs 2 comments. Thing I didn't mention in the last comment
Marmelade, the Lady of a brothel? I see what you did there, and I reallly love it.
You know something interesting? When I read the first lines of the story, I thought "Hey, got an idea! What if AJ goes to where she's supposed to and RD is there! And then maybe after some encounters and stuff AJ learns that RD actually looked for call mares that looked like AJ because she loves here but she's afraid to tell'er?"
It was funny how I thought exactly what you wrote before I read it! Really, this is amazing, you need to keep writing these.

In terms of both clop and story I'd have to rate this as one of the best appledash fics I've read.
Consider yourself and your stories stalked.:trollestia:

I -loved- the wingplay in this chapter, and I really like where you're going with Dash's 'wishlist' of what kinda pony she wanted. I'm more than a little excited to read chapter 3 and see what's next in this story =)

This is a truly excellent story; wonderfully written and with a whole lot of emotion between the lines.
:heart:

I love your Applejack. She fits perfectly in with canon AJ, but has your own touch as well. You spend a lot of time developing her and do a really solid job. Dash really doesn't get much attention until the last chapter, but this story is about AJ. How she got into this situation, how she reacted to it, how she treats Dash, everything. Heck, you even explain the rope fetish. Very nice story.

Also: FINALLY, SOMEPONY WHO GOES TO RARITY ABOUT RELATIONSHIP ADVICE! Every shipfic I read where the characters get confused, no one ever goes to Rarity, the pony I think would be the obvious choice for this.

Har! outstanding sire!

BDSM?
My avatar is one color swap away from being a BDSM symbol. Not really. Shapes and lines are a little off.
...*stares*...
What?
...*slapped upside the head*...
Wow, there was a story here that wasn't bad. And had some sex in it. And the characters were intresting. That made sense. Neat.

I had a very similar idea to this, but it just seemed so out of character for Rainbow Dash, I swapped Rarity into her role. It still seems very out of character for her. Both the sneaking around, and being so submissive. But it made for a great story.

THIS.

I love this.

Its just...So good, in every aspect. Good writing, good grammar, good plot, and good clop.

10/10

Bravo! Bravisimo! Amazing, astounding, and awesome! Never, never, in all of the explicit stories I have read has bondage ever been so romantic and heartmoving! Well done my good pony, very well done indeed! Romantic, sexy, and even funny with the whole "Suckin yer apple for bits" part. You touched everything that is good about the show and then some.

I have to agree that this is a story with clop rather than a clop story, and that really does make a massive difference. I like kinky erotica, but I like solid character development more, and this fic certainly delivers in both departments.

Very well-written, both storyline and clop, and does a good job of keeping characters realistic and canon. Also, good use of an original story idea that shows that not all call girls or those who hire them are filthy. Also, the Pinkie Pie brothel thing: :rainbowlaugh:

I like. I like very much. One thing seemed a bit out of place, however. As a holder of one of the Elements of Harmony, two time time co-savior of Equestria, and personal friend of Princess Celestia, I'd think least AJ can expect is a tax exemption. A bad harvest, or a cartel driving down prices, or something like that as the cause of her financial troubles might fit a little better.

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That would be too easy of a solution though. "Hey, we have a problem that doesn't involve the elements of harmony? Just have the princess bail us out, lol!"

Would remove the conflict in a whole buttload of fics.

Wow, while sex is implied and pretty much mandatory in a story that has sex as a tag, this first chapter was handled spectacularly. I feel like the canon characters were portrayed well, which is rare. While clop will never be my thing, a story this well-written still has a place in my Favs and Likes. Good job, sir, good job indeed :twilightsmile: .

1794130 This! :rainbowlaugh:

And the story is going into my watch later list; sound's like something i will enjoy.

Clop shipping... done well. Wow, didn't think I'd ever say that :rainbowlaugh: .

Good job author, their personalities are intact, your writing is solid, and it's just in general a great story. Smooth, sir, real smooth :twilightsmile: .

Yea, this doesn't even feel like a clop-fic. It feels like an erotic romance. Nice. :ajsmug:
I think my boner actually fucked off at some point, albeit I wasn't paying attention, and any guy knows when a boner comes your way there's no ignoring it. That's like going to Las Vegas and not seeing all the lights. :twilightsheepish:
Have a moustache. :moustache:

The conversation between Rarity and Applejack about dresses was one of the best things I've read on here in a while... “I gotta go pack some rope.” hahahhahah

havent read it yet but im gonna go ahead and like looks awesome

And now my mind is full of fuck.

Or clop, if you prefer to call it that.

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