I am making this story at least readable for you, My Little Ponies.

Heart 97 has an idea, but the formatting needs to be a bit polished and edited.

Enjoy your... clop

1795437 he is right!
I think the plot and i write it, then he cleans formatting and do some edits

Wow, some night these ponies had.

...I wish I was there.

I dunno... I think it needs like... 20% more clop!

1798008 Indeed. I miss a good clop.

1796722 Lol

"Ahem... After drinking some cider I flew upside down for three or four minutes. Then, I found Soarin' that was criticizing me for not being able to fly like them.”
"What have you done then, dear?” said Rarity with curiosity.
"Well... I punched him on his dirty cheek and i sat with my flanks over his face, ordering him to lick the hole. Let me say this, he was pretty expert, ahaha!”

dammmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmqmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm didnt know dash was a fucking bitch about sex and also wats with all the lesbo stuff still good i give out of

MY BONER JUST REACHED A UNIVERSE OF EQUESTRIA 5 BILLION LIGHT YEARS AWAY RIGHT INTO LUNAS PLOT!!!!
THIS WAS UTTER FANSERVICE FOR ME!!!
HOLY CRAP NUGGETS IN A SHIT BISCUT I LOVE THIS!!!
and no im not messed up luna is my favorite character..... which means this is heaven

my life would be complete if i woke up next to luna and twilight...them staring at me when i wake up going..."ello sweetie"
that would make my life complete....hell yeah

and if that situation was in the bed both luna and twilight woke up in...that same day

An Editor is needed here, for minor things and such. other than that statement it is going pretty nicely plot wise from my point of view as the reader.

Ha

I don't care if it had clop or not this was a very infomative chapter this is this is turning into a great story

1795437 I'm sorry readable? Maybe i missed something. Its pretty bad when a 10 beers deep weekend warrior cant even read your sentence structure