The Fight
Twilight's room had finally settled down a bit, but Spike and The Cutie Mark Crusaders were still waiting to hear another barrage of yelling from beyond the door. Though it had only been about thirty-five minutes it felt as if Rarity and Twilight had been throwing insults back and forth the whole day.
"Again you put work before me," Twilight yelled furiously, "I can't believe just because it's Fancy Pants, you put spending time with me in the trash!"
"I do no such thing." Rarity exclaimed, "I merely move the date over so I can make some bits, unlike you, who just sits around and reads all day!"
Another exchange of verbal abuse and another shot of magic countered by a magical barrier. It had been like this after Rarity made the 'getting to big for my dresses' comment.
“And you keep doing just that, over and over again,” Twilight shot back with anger dripping from every word, “ We haven’t done anything together in months.”
Rarity mumbled under her breath and all Twilight caught was “Sex addict.”
Twilight stood, in total shock at what she just heard, “Did you just call me a sex addict?!”
“I would never call anypony such a thing!” Rarity let sarcasm drip with her every word.
Twilight had thought of what she could do for a few seconds, I could simply throw another insult back at her, but that isn’t going to get me anywhere........ finally after a few seconds she had come up with a final idea, charge. In a flash of light Twilight had appeared about ten feet from Rarity’s side, and started to run at her.
“What are you...” Is all Rarity could say before Twilight had tackled her to the ground and started to attack her. The one thing that she hadn’t remembered was that Rarity was trained in martial arts.
By the time Twilight had time to hit Rarity three times she had already been thrown across the room, landing right next to her nightstand and having a book fall on her head from the shelf above. Twilight had let out a slight groan as she realised what just happened, and came to her senses.
Twilight regained all of her sense and hurled the book at Rarity, though it burst into a shower of papers when it hit the magical barrier. The book had been ruined, but the cover of the book landed near Twilight. When she saw that the book was her favorite fillyhood book she looked at Rarity with sadness and hatred in her eyes.
In a low growl Twilight finally spoke, "Out, I want you out." The words hung in the air, but were heavy as 'Tom' when they reached Rarity's ears.
"Excuse me, what was that dear?"
"OUT, I WANT YOU OUT!"
Those last words sent Twilight into a flurry of tears, Rarity just watched as Twilight cried, her tears dropping onto the floor leaving darkened stains.
"Twilight dear, please don't cry. I'm sorry for all the harsh things I've said." There was a while before Twilight had responded, but to Rarity's dismay she was still very mad
"I SAID OUT!" Twilight screamed, and in a flash of white she got just what she wanted.
In a flash of white light Rarity had appeared, but she didn’t know where all she saw was a large, white figure in front of her. After a second she could fully make the figure out, it was the princess, but she didn’t seem to notice that Rarity was present.
Rarity quickly took a bow and spoke, “Princess Celestia?”
“Ahhh,” Princess Celestia jumped and turned around to see Rarity bowing, “Rarity, what are you doing here?”
Rarity began explaining to the princess the events of the past morning, and when she finished the princess didn’t look all too pleased with her. As the princess began to speak, Rarity was getting ready to bring her head down into her hooves.
Celestia couldn’t help but let out a thunderous laugh, “You called her a sex addict?!”
“Wha.......What, why does that matter?”
“You think her intelligence is the only thing she learned from me?” Celestia said, while winking at Rarity.
Rarity sat there dumbfounded as her mind registered what she was just told. Her mind was telling her to get up and leave, but before she could Princess Celestia began telling stories of her bedroom antics. After the princess had told her many stories of what she did to help Twilight ‘learn,’ Rarity began to think of all the ponies she listed.
She had multiple one night stands and most of them were with ponies I knew. Joe, Blueblood, and Big Mac. Even mares like Octavia, Vinyl, and Derpy!
“I’m terribly sorry Princess Celestia, but I must take my leave.” Rarity had just barely finished her sentence before she started backing out of the princesses private quarters.
“Hmmm, oh Rarity I forgot you were even here”
Rarity just barely caught that last sentence before she was out of the door. Never again will I be able to look at or think of
Princess Celestia the same again. Her mind pondered a these things until she had realized she walked in a straight line and found herself inside a room.
She looked around to see if she recognized where she was, only to see a smaller midnight blue alicorn sitting at a desk with a book raised to her face. That book, where have I seen it’s cover before? She looked at the book closely until she had realized the origin of the cover. Tha.....that’s one of Fluttershy’s clopfics. If I back out quick enough I might not make enough sound to get her attention. She started hastily backing away in an attempt to leave before she got Princess Luna’s attention. To her demise the door was a pull door, not a push door.
THUD, Princess Luna turned around, her face was as red as Big Mac’s coat. “Who....Who’s there?”
“R-r-rarity, the element of generosity, Princess Luna.” Rarity had replied, her voice was quiet and she had stuttered a bit when she was speaking.
As Rarity was turning around to open the door, she heard Luna start talking, but decided to ignore her and continue. Right as she began to open the door an aura had overcome it and slammed it shut.
“Did you hear what I just asked?” Luna questioned Rarity with a voice that was near the tone of the royal Canterlot voice.
“No, your highness, I thought you were just asking me to leave.”
“I asked if you could get me a meeting with the author of this book, Fluttershy.” Her tone had quieted, but Rarity knew it would get a lot louder than before if she said no.
“Of course I could, she is my BPFF. How does next weekend sound, your highness.”
“Thank you Rarity, also you can just call me Luna.”
After that ordeal with Luna and Celestia, Rarity finally made her way to the front door. As she was leaving she saw a stallion that she knew very well, Shining Armor. When she had seen him she ducked behind the nearest object waiting for him to leave, and after 45 minutes of him not moving a muscle she got closer for an inspection. To her surprise it was a life like model of him, so without further interruption she made her way out the door, and to the train station. The whole time she only had one mare on her mind.
Twilight sat for a moment and just let the tears continue falling, finally she picked herself and the book up. She tried to put the book back together with her magic, but was too frustrated to keep control of her magic. When she gave up she walked outside of her room and looked for Spike, after a while of searching she found him.
“Spike,” Her voice was barely a whisper, “I’m going into town to find Rainbow Dash.”
“Ok, Twi I’ll be here in the library waiting for you to come back.” Spike knew that if he were to follow, he would regret it, but that didn’t stop The Cutie Mark Crusaders.
Twilight walked down the streets of Ponyville heading toward Sweet Apple Acres, where she knew that Rainbow Dash was taking her afternoon nap. As she approached Sweet Apple Acres she noticed only one cloud above the orchards, and she knew who was lying on that cloud.
“Rainbow,” Twilight called, her voice had risen back to it’s regular volume over the time of the walk, “Are you up there?”
After about five minutes of no reply Twilight was about to just turn around and go back home, when she felt wind blow right next to her. Rainbow Dash had landed by her side and was greeting her with a warm smile.
“Hey egghead,” Rainbow Dash said in a joking manner, “What’s wrong?”
“Me and Rarity got into a fight” Twilight replied, with a very quiet tone.
“Don’t you mean ‘Rarity and I’” Rainbow’s smile had gone down a bit, but she was still joking around.
“I really could care less about my speech right now.”
“I was just pointing it out, and what did you two fight about?”
“She moved another one of our dates so she could do work for Fancy Pants.” Twilight explained, while waving her hoof in a circular motion while saying ‘Fancy Pants.’
“Well why did you come to me?” This is it I’m finally going to get to tell Twilight that I love her.
“I teleported Rarity away after her magical barrier destroyed my favorite fillyhood book, and I think I know where I sent her. I just need you to fly there and see if she’s there.”
“So where did you send her?”
“To Canterlot, the castle to be exact. It was Princess Celestia who gave me the book and since it was on my mind when I teleported her I think that’s where she went.”
“Oh, no problem for the fastest pony in Equestria.” Dash bragged, while puffing her chest out and hitting a hoof on it.
“Thank you.” Twilight had pulled Rainbow into a hug, and as they parted Rainbow took the air to hide her blushing from Twilight.
Rainbow Dash had flown to Canterlot to see if Rarity was in the castle, and to her amazement, she was sitting there talking to the princess. After a few minutes of close observation it looked as if Rarity was a bit shaken up, but Rainbow thought it would be better not to crash through a royal princess’ window. Instead she flew back to Ponyville to tell Twilight what she saw.
Apple Bloom, Scootaloo, and Sweetie Belle had followed Twilight down the streets of Ponyville and to Sweet Apple Acres, where they saw Twilight and Rainbow Dash talking. Both Sweetie and Apple Bloom had to hold Scootaloo back from rushing out of the tree when she saw Twilight hug Rainbow. After a while they found themselves on the outside of a new cafe that just opened up in Ponyville, watching Twilight who looked like she was very anxious. Ten minutes passed and finally Rainbow had landed on the other end of the table and took a seat. They talked and had coffee for about 30 minutes, then went to an open field, laid down, and watched the clouds after 15 minutes Rainbow had looked at Twilight and started to kiss her. The Cutie Mark Crusaders started a full gallop back to the library.
“Did I just see what I think I just saw” Scootaloo asked while panting heavily.
“If the answer is your idol making out with another mare while dating my sister, then yes you did just see what you think you just saw.” Sweetie replied, freaking out because of what her sister would have to say once she heard of this.
“Maybe we don’t have tah tell anypony” Apple Bloom suggested, only to be met with a glare from Scoots and Sweetie.
“I say we tell Spike he’ll know what to do.”
“That sounds good to me.” Scoots replied
“Good idea Sweetie Belle” Apple Bloom had just finished her sentence when she went face first to the ground.
After a ten minute gallop The Cutie Mark Crusaders finally approached the door of the library. All three of them burst through the door at one time shouting for Spike.
“Spike!?” They all three yelled at once.
“What, What's wrong? Did something happen to Twilight?” Spike asked frantically.
“Ohhhh yes, something happened to Twilight,” Sweetie Belle replied, “Or at least something will.”
“What happened?”
“We were following Twilight, when her and Dash went out to a field and started making out.” Scootaloo couldn’t help but laugh a little at Spike’s face.
“What should we do?” Apple Bloom asked.
“I think we should tell Rarity and let them handle it.” Spike answered with a more than serious face.
After 20 minutes of waiting Twilight had come back to the library, Rarity was in tow after about 10 minutes. Spike thought it would be best to get the trouble out of the way first.
“Rarity.” Spike said, sounding a bit afraid of what she would say.
“Yes, Spikey wikey” Rarity had replied with her usual baby talk voice.
“The Cutie Mark Crusaders and I have something to tell you.”
“And what would that be.”
“.......” Silence had overcome everypony, and after 30 seconds Sweetie Belle spoke up.
“Today after Twilight had sent you wherever she sent you, we followed her around town to see if she was ok. We followed her to Sweet Apple Acres, where she met with Rainbow Dash and sent her towards Canterlot. When Rainbow returned to Ponyville they met at the new cafe that just opened up and had some coffee and talked, then they went to a field south of Ponyville to watch clouds and ended up......”
“Ended up what, Sweetie Belle?” Rarity had asked, a bit confused and mad that her sister was spying.
“Kissing...” Sweetie Belle said just barely audible to Scoots who was right next to her.
“What was that dear? You have to speak up for me to hear you.”
“Kissing!” Sweetie had uttered that one word as quick as she could.
“Twi....light was kissing Rainbow.” Rarity had a hard time saying that sentence.
Rarity looked as if she was about to break down into tears, “Is this true girls?”
Scoots and Apple Bloom looked at her and could tell the truth was hurting her, “Ye....Yes Ms. Rarity.” They said it almost simultaneously.
Twilight who was standing in the corner knew that this was the end of her’s and Rarity’s relationship, “Rarity...”
Rarity looked at Twilight, tears forming in her eyes, “I never want to hear from you again, Twilight Sparkle!” With that she started full gallop unto the roads of Ponyville, until she found herself at Fluttershy’s cottage.
Okay people who read this, this is my first fan fic and I hope you like it there will be more to come so don’t worry. Now time to say who all has helped me create this. Sam Cole, If you read this man thanks for the pep talk that got me to start this and keep going. My friend Zack, who doesn’t have a Fimfiction account, but will probably see this. Thanks man for keeping me entertained with jokes and all while I wrote this, you were a great help. So to those two give them a round of applause, also go check out Sam Cole’s story Damn It Twilight, I Love You. BYE...... for now.
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1742993 Yes, I realize the amount of retardation put into that. I'll be honest this was more of a self accomplishment story so I didn't put much thought into the description.
My favorite color is hat because bread does not fly.
1743041 You lost me on that note.
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1743055 Hey thanks for putting that in the comments so I could catch that mistake.
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How very ironic. Or is that meta? REGIDAR ASSIST.
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1743099 And thank you for that, my typing is off tonight. So thanks.
Great story and Great job dude. Keep writing. I want to read more chapters.
1743344 and more you'll get, but after I get some sleep.
[OBLIGATORY GOTYE LYRICS HERE]
"She had multiple one night stands and most of them were with ponies I knew."
"that’s one of Fluttershy’s clopfics."
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The dialogue and plot was robotic and felt really forced/contrived. Numerous grammar and punctuation errors, too.
1743477 Like I said what's that got to do with the price of tea in china. This story as created and finished as more of an 'I actually saw one through to the end' stories so as I always say. Thank you for pointing out things I need to fix, and have a nice day
1743460 I actually got the idea for this fic while listening to that song. So yea "But you didn't have to cut me off!"
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Too much?
this is what happened when i started reading this
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there i just thumbs upped you and made your
like to dislike ratio 3:1
1743602 I read this comment ten minutes ago and I just stopped laughing man.1743603 well you at least got to read the story after a while, right?
No offense, but why does just about every new ship story I read is a TwiDash story? How can that even work? Still, you get a like and a watch and I can't wait for moar drama.
Also: the great ship Rarilight has gone down but will it come back?
1744445 yes all ships will work themselves out eventually, probably around Chapter 6
1745262 well ok then, keep up the good work
1745324 Thank you, and have a nice day
MOAR!!!! I NEED MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!
I like it.
Keep writing, I can't wait to read more.
I liked the Raritwi better, tbh. Twidash just seems a bit too common nowadays....