When Ponyville's spotlight fillyfoolers start fighting nopony is safe. A morning of arguing and the two don't stop until the other is gone for good. But is that always the best thing?
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1742993 Yes, I realize the amount of retardation put into that. I'll be honest this was more of a self accomplishment story so I didn't put much thought into the description.
My favorite color is hat because bread does not fly.
1743041 You lost me on that note.
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1743055 Hey thanks for putting that in the comments so I could catch that mistake.
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How very ironic. Or is that meta? REGIDAR ASSIST.
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1743099 And thank you for that, my typing is off tonight. So thanks.
Great story and Great job dude. Keep writing. I want to read more chapters.
1743344 and more you'll get, but after I get some sleep.
[OBLIGATORY GOTYE LYRICS HERE]
"She had multiple one night stands and most of them were with ponies I knew."
"that’s one of Fluttershy’s clopfics."
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The dialogue and plot was robotic and felt really forced/contrived. Numerous grammar and punctuation errors, too.
1743477 Like I said what's that got to do with the price of tea in china. This story as created and finished as more of an 'I actually saw one through to the end' stories so as I always say. Thank you for pointing out things I need to fix, and have a nice day
1743460 I actually got the idea for this fic while listening to that song. So yea "But you didn't have to cut me off!"
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Too much?
this is what happened when i started reading this
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there i just thumbs upped you and made your
like to dislike ratio 3:1
1743602 I read this comment ten minutes ago and I just stopped laughing man.1743603 well you at least got to read the story after a while, right?
No offense, but why does just about every new ship story I read is a TwiDash story? How can that even work? Still, you get a like and a watch and I can't wait for moar drama.
Also: the great ship Rarilight has gone down but will it come back?
1744445 yes all ships will work themselves out eventually, probably around Chapter 6
1745262 well ok then, keep up the good work
1745324 Thank you, and have a nice day
MOAR!!!! I NEED MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!
I like it.
Keep writing, I can't wait to read more.
it took you a week to finnish this? we need to get you the lemon helmet thing Zaphod used!
1939953 Yes we do then again thats from 2 hours each morning of that week. The rest of that time I was trying to find my towel.
1939985 if you wanna survive, you had better figure out were your fuckign towel is!
I did........ Please no vogon poetry... please
2161227 Thanks bro.
Oh that's so sad :'(
Great job though :3
2694729Thanks more to come once I get internet at home
[youtube=www.youtube.com/watch?v=ftE9uSPpecs] It's not the original but this is way better.
3213728 That's where the story is inspired from. And hope you liked the story.
3214702 I really don't like gay shipping, but this has my interest.
3218717 Well atleast it has your attention. I understand where you're coming from, but in my eyes it really doesn't matter.
this is simply amazing!! I love every bit of it and cant wait to read more. please keep up the amazing work!! also cant wait for the new chapter (Dont care how long I have to wait its awesome!)
I liked the Raritwi better, tbh. Twidash just seems a bit too common nowadays....