I do that in the later chapters. I copied this first 6 chapters from my DeviantArt account, but I didn't really get to doing the edits people wanted me to do. Sorry about that :(.
Dialouge will be fixed by the end of today, by the way. But the dialogue gets easier to read in later chapters, if my mistakes in the previous chapters hasn't messed up the story for people.
I this idea! It's always a great thing to weave the real tragedy of ignorance into a good plot.
Just one suggestion: got a transgender mare you could put in? It might be far out for some, but there are plenty of us tgirls that read up on MLP:FIM too!
Thanks so much for the compliments, I'm glad you guys like the story idea!
As I've said before, later chapters fix the paragraph issue. The first few chapters will be fixed ASAP. I'll run a spellcheck/grammar check on the chapters too, thank you for catching that, Starswirls :3.
and I'm glad you laughed, GFP. Laughing is good :D.
Sexy.
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I do that in the later chapters. I copied this first 6 chapters from my DeviantArt account, but I didn't really get to doing the edits people wanted me to do. Sorry about that :(.
Dialouge will be fixed by the end of today, by the way. But the dialogue gets easier to read in later chapters, if my mistakes in the previous chapters hasn't messed up the story for people.
I this idea! It's always a great thing to weave the real tragedy of ignorance into a good plot.
Just one suggestion: got a transgender mare you could put in? It might be far out for some, but there are plenty of us tgirls that read up on MLP:FIM too!
Liked, fave'd, and watching!
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I intend to have one in there! However, it's a secret :). It'll be revealed next chapter, though!
>>CDFA
Thanks! And keep going! For teh bootyfull poniezzz! javascript:smilie('');
Thanks so much for the compliments, I'm glad you guys like the story idea!
As I've said before, later chapters fix the paragraph issue. The first few chapters will be fixed ASAP. I'll run a spellcheck/grammar check on the chapters too, thank you for catching that, Starswirls :3.
and I'm glad you laughed, GFP. Laughing is good :D.
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UPDATE NOV 30 7:35 PM PST.
Chapters 1 and 2 fixed!
Looks good so far, if not a bit unusual and very strong language ;), However as said before, all that caps makes it hard to read.