You really should indent and/or double-space between paragraphs and new lines of dialogue. The current formatting is very wall-o'-text-ish and difficult to read.

Also, I'd strongly recommend reading up on dialogue conventions. Your punctuation and capitalization are consistently incorrect.

Just out of curiostiy, what does a symbol for a major chord look like? I didn't know they made something for that.

You NEED an editer. Your grammer isnt the best and there are parts where i camt even understand what your saying. I cant STAND bad grammer but the story is so good that it drowns that out. Fix the grammer and this will bbe my favorite story!!!!

-Michael A.