There's Always Tomorrow
The loving pair eventually made their way back to the barn carrying apple laden baskets, Macintosh was carrying nearly twice as much as Twilight.
"Ah was wonderin' what happened to y'all," said Applejack as she came out of the barn, "Ah was about tah go lookin' for you."
Twilight turned her face away slightly as she began blushing profusely, remembering what she had wanted to do out there.
"How's thah schedule lookin' AJ?" asked Macintosh.
"Mighty fine, thanks tah Twilight here," said the farm mare.
"Oh, it was nothing," said Twilight.
"Ha! By nothin' you must mean a giant head start!" said Applejack enthusiastically. "Just you helping has pushed our schedule about three days forward."
Twilight's blush returned with a vengeance at Applejack's
praising. "Really though, I just wanted to help," said the librarian.
"Anyways, I'll be sellin' apples in Ponyville tomorrow, when Ah finish doyou want tah get lunch with me?"
Twilight completely ignored the question and asked, "Doesn't Macintosh worked the apple stand?"
"Eeyup, I was gonna give him a day off," Applejack explained.
Inside, Twilight was about to explode with excitement but outside, "Sounds good, Applejack. Just stop by the library whenever you're done!" Twilight struggled to keep calm with the prospect of Macintosh having a day off.
"Ok then, come on Big Mac, the barn needs a little fixin'," Applejack started walking away.
Macintosh started to follow but Twilight stepped in front of him, "As for you, you should come over after my lunch date with Applejack and we'll do something fun."
Twilight caught his blush and smiled, "Maybe that kind've fun if you're lucky."
She walked down the path and towards Ponyville and Macintosh just stood there thinking, What did Ah do to get a mare like her, and find myself in Ponyville's biggest scandal that'll have Applejack in a rage when she finds finds out.
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Please ignore that first line
Ok, really short chapter I know bu,
Who should Rainbow Dash go to?
Also, check out my two new stories
1475644 Rarity or Fluttershy
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That was fast
Why so short? That's kinda cruel. i want more.
1475644 thunderlane or soarin theres little of the straight dash in fiction
Straight Dash please. Put her with the Doctor!
Also, short chapter is VERY short.
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Sorry, I have a few things going on right now and couldn't make this more then a transition.
Next chapter will have way more
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I meant with their secret...
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I meant who to go to with Mac and Twi's secret.
And I have plans for Dashie, straight plans so don't you fret
What this needs is some clop...
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Sorry, I don't write clop...
1475901 oopsie I was reading this on my phone on my work break..um maybe Rarity? she would be the one to talk to about a romantic scandal or just Fluttershy/Pinkie if she just runs into them while flying away. Aj would probably be the last to find out by accident if your going for a laugh or it quickly got out of hand thing
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No prob, I write/read/watch ponies on my phone
1475644 Either Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie or both at the same time.
Rarity is out of the question cause Spike alerted her about Twilight's odd behavior and is probably on the case.
looks like 5 people got on big macs' bad side
I do have to say that i like this!
I am stalking you
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Ahhh! Creeper Pinkie!!!
Do you have any idea why they disliked it? I don't mind that they did, I just wished I knew why so I could fix it.
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Ever heard the norwegian saying "til lags åt alle kan ingen gjera" (translated into english: nobody can make everyone happy)?
Well, that's why. You can't make everyone happy at the SAME time.
My point is that this fall outside the moral codes/personal preferences of some, and thus they thumb it down. If you want to make them happy you need to fundamentaly change the sory and thus get negatie thumbs form a new group of people.
No point in changing anything with a higher thumb ratio than 90%
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Alrighty
BTW, nice picture of RainbowDash you have for your profile picture.
1487198 it looks better in 16:9, here
Seriously, you just keep on writing. you are doing great
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Will do!
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So I take it you like this story, anyways, I you have any ideas for this coming shitstorm in this story?
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don't worry, you won't get one.
a shitstorm usually occurs when the story is bad enough to recieve thumbs down from regualr users and from those that just tumb down
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Oh, I meant in the story, like how should AJ find out
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). What hapens next is unsure. One thing i know is that the frinedship between AJ and Twi wil get a bit awkward consiering that AJ think she got banged by her brother. so to speak 
Ah that... wel, first she would be to stuborn to believe it (unless she catches them red hoofed
OK, she might get mad on herself knowing that she'd tried to ship mac ans flutters while mac was in a relationship. AN other thing that COULD happen was she lecturing both twi and mac about being gentlecolt/propper mare and not do anything dirty
I am more worried about how Shining wil react. he could possilby end up assaulting big mac (that'd be one great fistfight). He might even go as far as to constantly guard twi to prevent them from dating
I'm sure there wil be a lot of non lethal magic involved in the meetings between Twi and shining whenever Twi is going to see mac.
Seriously, be creative.
I know that there's a lot of spelling mistakes and such, so please excuse mee.
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Oh my God! Get out of my head!!
I have a very dramatic scene planned out for when Armor finds out.
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Then start writing goddamit
I can't wait to read it
no, i don't plan on getting out of your head. There's so many great ideas in there, and it's to troublesome to hire pinkie as a spy. She's so sloppy in her job
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Please not Pinkie Pie! Last time she was in my head confetti was coming out of my ears whenever I went swimming.
Oh, and chapter four is flowing a little slower for me for some reason
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work
Oh, yeah - she's pregnant. I just don't get why AJ's not for Twi and Mac together.