Good story, a couple of noticeable grammar slips here and there, but nothing too jarring. I'm interested in seeing how the two's relationship works out.
Was reading this with my ipod on shuffle, as i get into the chapter, it begins playing Mockingbird followed by My Cadence... How the fuck did it know what i was reading, i almost cried.
Maybe the rain is a tribute. The skies weep for the loss of such a wonderful stallion, shaping the weather to reflect the loss and mournful aura appropriate for the occasion. Knowing the ponies she has to deal with, these surely aren’t tears, but surely something more appropriate and disgusting . . .
This needs to be featured. Excellent job.
Interesting concept. It's interesting to think of the ever-so-annoying diamond tiara in a new setting.
I really like this story so far and hope it goes on like this.
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Interesting thus far to say the least.
I will point out this one issue I found, however...
Did you have, not did you had.
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I'll take responsibility for that, I was the proofreader. Can't believe I missed that
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Well done.
A clopfic about two girl fillies that hate eachother!?
Seems legit.
Not missing a single chapter of this story. Prepared to be watched.
Sounds good to me. I have never read Foalcon, but this is as good a place to start as any other.
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A DiamondSpoon romance clopfic, or a DiamondBloom romance clopfic? This I have to see.
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Technically it isn't foalcon. They're aged up to nearly Mane Six age.
Good story, a couple of noticeable grammar slips here and there, but nothing too jarring. I'm interested in seeing how the two's relationship works out.
this is me.. watching how this progresses.
Was reading this with my ipod on shuffle, as i get into the chapter, it begins playing Mockingbird followed by My Cadence... How the fuck did it know what i was reading, i almost cried.
So well written, I applaud you !
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IT KNOWS
what is this supposed to mean?