You know this is all the girl fault when someone finds out Spike raped Diamond Tiara. Should have just give Rarity more time, but noooooo, leave the dragon with a hard on going threw a lust phase and she what happens.
Well it couldn't have happened to a better pony. That been said I would have liked more detail in the act.
Also you may want to correct the word "mare" for DT. She was a filly when it started.
only have two problems with this 1 the first sex seen you do it rape why dude you had plenty of other opportunity to do happy loving sex but no you had to do rape
and my second angry criyk of this is why is Discord the dragon father in my opinion it would make more sense for him to be a part of the dragon father like the chaos creation and Spike has to find and gather all the pieces of the dragon father because their is no way in hell a fucken alicorn can beat the dragon god on a bad day long live the dragons and death to stupid alicorns
3026270 Because the original concept of this fic was based around Spike Raping Twilight and Rarity; but as I said before, the more I write, the more things change. The Romance was only there to darken Spikes decent.
To your second point; there is a reason why discord is the dragon father and why Alicorns were able to defeat him. This was also suppose to be part of a series. When this one ended; Spike was suppose to enter his rage phase. Yeah, that one was going to be fun!
Oh, God. You?... You not...? Oh, you did, not did?DANMAT, DAMIEN!
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phrasing man!
You know this is all the girl fault when someone finds out Spike raped Diamond Tiara. Should have just give Rarity more time, but noooooo, leave the dragon with a hard on going threw a lust phase and she what happens.
Well it couldn't have happened to a better pony. That been said I would have liked more detail in the act.
Also you may want to correct the word "mare" for DT. She was a filly when it started.
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Damn I thought I had got them all....damn dyslexia -_-
only have two problems with this 1 the first sex seen you do it rape why dude you had plenty of other opportunity to do happy loving sex but no you had to do rape
and my second angry criyk of this is why is Discord the dragon father in my opinion it would make more sense for him to be a part of the dragon father like the chaos creation and Spike has to find and gather all the pieces of the dragon father because their is no way in hell a fucken alicorn can beat the dragon god on a bad day long live the dragons and death to stupid alicorns
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Because the original concept of this fic was based around Spike Raping Twilight and Rarity; but as I said before, the more I write, the more things change. The Romance was only there to darken Spikes decent.
To your second point; there is a reason why discord is the dragon father and why Alicorns were able to defeat him. This was also suppose to be part of a series. When this one ended; Spike was suppose to enter his rage phase. Yeah, that one was going to be fun!
3032073 well looks like I under estimated you