Honestly.. I felt like I was both rushing and dragging along with this chapter. I also have no clue if I was using the semi colon correctly and I have no shame in emitting. Also I plan on doing a drawing of a scene from chapter one soon, but I'm stuck between two scenes I want to do. There was something else, but I just can't seem to remember what.
I like the concept, it's unique of its own right and feels good overall. There were more than a few grammar and spelling mistakes in chapter one. More than a few less than several. Chapter three is fine, I wait with much anticipation -Sturrn
Honestly.. I felt like I was both rushing and dragging along with this chapter. I also have no clue if I was using the semi colon correctly and I have no shame in emitting. Also I plan on doing a drawing of a scene from chapter one soon, but I'm stuck between two scenes I want to do. There was something else, but I just can't seem to remember what.
Due to the romance tag, i'm wondering who will be shipped with Spike.
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That wasn't a bit of a given in chapter two...well I guess it might not have been since I suck with creating romantic moments and scenes.
Spike is losing it
I like the concept, it's unique of its own right and feels good overall.
There were more than a few grammar and spelling mistakes in chapter one. More than a few less than several.
Chapter three is fine, I wait with much anticipation
-Sturrn
Alright we are about to kick sanity in the balls and shove it out the door.
I think exactly how Rarity was feeling about turning down Spike shows how she really feels about him.