This is really good so far!

Good to see it on here! Gonna read this top shelf shit RIGHT NOW.

Who thumbs-downs stories like these so fast lmao

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There's a bunch of people on here who are salty about prose versions of greentexts and other Anon fics taking over the front page.

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Yeesh! Nothing at all wrong with either of those things. Personally I've yet to have any problems with greentext converted stories. It's the straight greentext format stories I have a somewhat irrational dislike for, though I wouldn't downvote stories for that. Never understood people who downvote the kind of subjects/formats they don't like, especially when these things are right upfront in the tags or descriptions.

Off to a good start with this story. I'll be following it.

I can't wait for more!

This is really well written! Also the pacing is great.

Not wanting to be left behind, you clutch the handle of your suitcase and roll it out into the aisle, joining the tired masses with a huff of exhausted breath as you stand.You give a polite nod to the cabin’s attendant as you step out onto the landing, the cold air greeting you by nipping at your nose with a stray breeze.

These two need a space.

As far as you can remember, you felt fine. Were you really so deeply buried that you couldn’t even recognize it..?

No clue if I'm trippin or not, but I think it should be "...?" and not "..?"

“Nnnnnnnnnnyes.”

Another good chapter lol, looking forward to the next one.

Also he did, indeed, arrive.

...or did he?

Nice