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What secret?
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This secret.
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Ah, right. Thanks!
So Barnon didn't think to buy an air fryer?
Spamazon is watching you.
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Air fryers are the shiz ... Bitch. I've automatically added one to your Spamazon cart.
Wait till you see a pink-mane, yellow-fur Pegasus version. That one could establish its own department.
Twilight just literally expanded her Friendship Study to the whole new dimension.
Hahha that pic 🤣
Love the premise here, but so far it's been really hard to find the guy either likeable or relatable lol. So far all we really know is that the dude talks like a 14 year old 4chan poster (which already says good stuff about him lol), likes to call people slurs (which says even better stuff about him), is only mildly upset over basically insulting someone and making fun of them for unintentionally causing her to think she was a cannibal just because he thought she stole his burrito, and only at the very end does he make a huge jump forward in being likeable by being slightly nice.
The writing quality is good, the descriptions and dialogue are nice for the most part, and Twilight seems as adorkable as ever. My main issue so far is that his entire backstory might as well not exist. Despite how far in the future this is nothing seems different; besides a few changed names this reads exactly like someone living in 2016 Earth who probably spends too much time on 4chan or something. Dude barely seems to care about the entire other world and portal he's found or if it could be a danger due to it showing up with him being in a ship in space, nor does Twilight seem all that interested in questioning this other world she's come across.
Surprised he hasn't offered a peace offering. That's how sorry works, right? Maybe introduce her to cup noodles!