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Queen Bitch had that coming when she was attacking you from behind, DON'T pity her if she doesn't change her ways.
Dude, come on. Don't blame your life for a asshole of a "father".
So few things in life are fair. But these are lessons well learned in the river of life. Willingly or otherwise
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I mean, he is still a human on the inside. So of course childhood trauma is going to pop up every now and then.
Please get an editor
Eh. What was the point of him being a wise elder voodoo man just to turn him back into a kid still trying to get over his trauma?
This scene would have made a lot more sense if he had died when he was still a young man. It would also make it understandable why everyone insists on calling him young one or little one or some other variation.
Unless the constant contradictions are intentional? Cant be too sure if you have this all planned out or are flying by the seat of your pants.
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Its because of his younger form that the trauma affected him so. While he is mature mentally, his younger form can cause him to temporarily fall victim to the childhood trauma. Think of it as a form of weakness he has. After all, he is an all-powerful voodoo god. He can't be all invincible.
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The simplest of traumas can break a man into a mere child, So it's not surprising that he thinks of himself like that and broke down. Or unless you don't even know what a tramatic experience Is, especially one of that magnitude.
Quick little grammar correction; when a new character starts speaking, they do so in a new paragraph. An example would be how I have altered the above paragraph below.
Only complaint is calling Chrissy a slut, girl gotta eat too you know. I just of course but will hope she getting a better end, she a face of mine. On to next chapter!
Hm, no deal for Queeny. But mad props to her for not giving up her kids. Clear case it was not greed. So good on her!