Alternate episode 'The Cutie Remark'. Twilight is trapped in the Ashlands timeline where Equestria was destroyed and must find her way back to her own time. There she finds an enemy she never expected to fight: her other self Midnight Sparkle.
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Admittedly, Starlight's fate was extremely questionable and got me wary of where this story would lead. The story had some hooks in it, until the next important character.
Your writing is really interesting so far. Unlike other FoE, a few that I have read really, yours seems to be in the thick of the action with a somewhat decent breathing room in there to let the information digest.
You've paced yourself really well. Not perfect, but a feeling along the lines of homemade and just right. It has that bite-sized but in 10k words feeling.
I am curious to see where you are going with the story!
Also... I kinda forgot a lot about the original FoE and Project Horizons. Millions of adventures, tiny details, and emotions compressed into a large novel tends to make certain parts... rereadable.
This story feels like a great refresher. Feels as if I am reading FoE for the first time again.
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Though I made a lot of intentional references, I tried to set it apart from FoE. I originally planned to use some of the same characters in an alternate reality setting (and even got permission to from the author), but then I decided it'd be less predictable with new OCs.
Anyway I'm glad you like it so far. Though even I'm not completely satisfied with the pacing, I hope it keeps you locked in at least :p
Full disclosure, I was able to read most of the story before it's final rendition and my OC, Mercury Shine is in this story. That said, these two things don't influence my opinion of the story. I don't give credit where it isn't due and this story absolutely deserves credit for being very well written and entertaining.
MLP is my all time favourite thing ever. It's genuinely one of the few things that makes me happy in any way in this world. I'm also not much of a reader. I like playing games, watching movies, etc. Even books I find engaging tend to be a slog and I consume them best through audio books. Once I started reading Ashlands, I couldn't put it down. The story had me super engaged for every twist and turn, I liked the characters and the overall story a lot, the worldbuilding is fantastic and the banter between the characters is great and highly amusing. This story is absolutely well worth the read.
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I appreciate the kind opinion