Alternate episode 'The Cutie Remark'. Twilight is trapped in the Ashlands timeline where Equestria was destroyed and must find her way back to her own time. There she finds an enemy she never expected to fight: her other self Midnight Sparkle.
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ok wow way to trow everyone off with tranquil
I can almost see the plague of friendship taking root in Crimson. I can't wait to witness the corruption of Twilight's next victim
This chapter is perfect!
The perfect twists of multiple emotions and at the same time!
I can't wait to see more of this gang. I should have expected the mare on the cover art to be it.
Twilight's worries were so palpable. It's almost like a saying I've read in one of the FoE fics came close to fruition again: "the Wasteland changes you."
Maybe it still would corrupt her, but until then, Twilight now has more time and friends to weather the inevitable.
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The story wouldn't really work without Twilight changing a bit, but I tried to make it seem realistic too. I didn't want her to just suddenly be edgier and then suddenly be back to normal at the end, while still not completely losing herself.
Twilight is probably the most important character overall, but I guess Crimson represents what she in her naivety would consider one of her primary challenges. Also it's a cool image I commissioned and I wanted to use it I actually have other art I commissioned of it that I should really post to the pony boorus.
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Poor Crimson. No matter which way she goes she'll still hate herself for different reasons.
Making Crimson's character arc seem at least feasible was a big challenge though. I didn't want her to turn on a dime like so many characters did in the show.
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It was actually really hard to figure out what to do with them. I went back and rewrote their parts a few times with big changes.