But anyways here I wanted to make a parallel with Rainbow and Dean since both had their destinies affected by Yuujirou, one directly and the other, not so much.
If you hadn't noticed before this fic will go much, much further than MLP Cannon and I already have the villain for this arc planned.
By the way, has anyone noticed something about Celestia in this chapter? In the previous one, no one seemed to notice my hint.
I admit, this story was a good bit hectic for me, and I certainly lost the thread a couple of times in the second and third chapters, even with some relatively decent knowledge of the Baki series, I still found it quite enjoyable and definitely something I will keep track on if the pacing and quality can stay on this chapter's level. Despite it only being four chapters, however, I must say I am drawn in by the will of the characters, even though they're fictional, for at least some paragraphs at a time I felt the determination and conviction of their worldviews and experiences, that is certainly the strongest aspect I see so far, and definitely what I will come back for future chapters for.
Thanks for the update!
This... Was a fucking pain in the ass to edit.
But anyways here I wanted to make a parallel with Rainbow and Dean since both had their destinies affected by Yuujirou, one directly and the other, not so much.
If you hadn't noticed before this fic will go much, much further than MLP Cannon and I already have the villain for this arc planned.
By the way, has anyone noticed something about Celestia in this chapter? In the previous one, no one seemed to notice my hint.
I admit, this story was a good bit hectic for me, and I certainly lost the thread a couple of times in the second and third chapters, even with some relatively decent knowledge of the Baki series, I still found it quite enjoyable and definitely something I will keep track on if the pacing and quality can stay on this chapter's level. Despite it only being four chapters, however, I must say I am drawn in by the will of the characters, even though they're fictional, for at least some paragraphs at a time I felt the determination and conviction of their worldviews and experiences, that is certainly the strongest aspect I see so far, and definitely what I will come back for future chapters for.
...And everything fell