Finally done! 1 month and a shit ton of complications, do not worry everyone the next chapter already has 18k+ words, it's just not complete because of the damn wifi I'm already a week without this shit.
If the grammar or flow seems of lower quality in the second half of this chap it's because I didn't review it fully.
But anyway I feel like I made it pretty obvious already that my characters are neither perfect nor always right, Dean is a paranoid man, who, in this case, isn't fully wrong to be so.
Fluttershy is an anti-social, anxious, and somewhat cowardly pegasus who is just learning how to re-integrate into her own society and has various preconceptions of many things.
I'm truly not writing any character to be likable or dislikable I'm just making them mortal here, and while you as readers can see much, they can't, and even then all of you don't connect the dots always.
Something Dean is quite desperately wanting to do, something chained his soul and something in Equus has already proven to be able to control minds, the question here is how much he is exaggerating or underrating it.
Finally done! 1 month and a shit ton of complications, do not worry everyone the next chapter already has 18k+ words, it's just not complete because of the damn wifi I'm already a week without this shit.
If the grammar or flow seems of lower quality in the second half of this chap it's because I didn't review it fully.
But anyway I feel like I made it pretty obvious already that my characters are neither perfect nor always right, Dean is a paranoid man, who, in this case, isn't fully wrong to be so.
Fluttershy is an anti-social, anxious, and somewhat cowardly pegasus who is just learning how to re-integrate into her own society and has various preconceptions of many things.
I'm truly not writing any character to be likable or dislikable I'm just making them mortal here, and while you as readers can see much, they can't, and even then all of you don't connect the dots always.
Something Dean is quite desperately wanting to do, something chained his soul and something in Equus has already proven to be able to control minds, the question here is how much he is exaggerating or underrating it.
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The problem with paranoia is you only have to be right once to feel justified in feeling it all this time.
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Did not know that or about that universe might check it out also I got this and another story mixed up