Nice work on this story mr lewd! Found a small grammar thing for you to fix "It was later than her previous visit, the time pushing 10 PMwhen Rarity" apologies for the bad format lol, don't know how to reference a certain story point in these.
I can imagine a sequel to this, but I love the story. But the problem with stepping on ants. Eventually you're going to step on too many and then it becomes a problem
Really well written; even though I knew Flurry was going to be a total villain in this, I was still surprised by her sudden switch up during their second kiss. I always headcanon older Flurry as a brat who takes full advantage of her royal status while still having the brains of the situation. Definitely a favorite.
Surprisingly, I don't hate Flurry in this story, even though she is despicable.Maybe because she is a confident, powerful and spoiled brat that thinks she can do whatever she wants(and she does). I honestly like that Flurry doesn't have a legit reason for abusing Rarity, she is just doing it because she can and knows she can't be stopped, and deep down, I bet almost everyone would want that power. One question though:is Flurry in this AU actually stronger than all the princessess or is she just cocky?
11579805 100%, she is genuinely the strongest known entity in her universe, but no one knows that except her. Her parents remember her having some pretty intense magic as a baby, but they thought she leveled out as she got older. Quite the opposite, she's only gotten stronger, and as she said, she can't even be bothered to tap into her full potential.
I'll say it like this: If she woke up tomorrow and decided to lay siege to Canterlot, Celestia could call in Luna, Twilight and the other Elements, and Discord, and she might bring them to a stalemate. If she decided to prep for maybe a month, she'd have Canterlot under her control before Celestia could send out a letter asking for backup.
Wow. What a story!!!
It's good!!!
Wonder what you'll do next?? Button mash x chrysalis??
Button x Zecora??
Zecora x Twilight??
I look forward to whatever you do!!
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Thanks, uce
Nice work on this story mr lewd! Found a small grammar thing for you to fix "It was later than her previous visit, the time pushing 10 PMwhen Rarity" apologies for the bad format lol, don't know how to reference a certain story point in these.
Flurry is evil in this. I'm legitimately impressed by how monstrous she is.
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It was a lot of fun to find new ways of torment for poor Auntie Rara.
I can imagine a sequel to this, but I love the story. But the problem with stepping on ants. Eventually you're going to step on too many and then it becomes a problem
Really well written; even though I knew Flurry was going to be a total villain in this, I was still surprised by her sudden switch up during their second kiss. I always headcanon older Flurry as a brat who takes full advantage of her royal status while still having the brains of the situation. Definitely a favorite.
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Tiny Tyrant Flurry is a nice change of pace from how I normally write her. Glad you enjoyed, cause it was a lot of fun
Perhaps Flurry Heart might tried to claim someone more destined with?
Surprisingly, I don't hate Flurry in this story, even though she is despicable.Maybe because she is a confident, powerful and spoiled brat that thinks she can do whatever she wants(and she does).
I honestly like that Flurry doesn't have a legit reason for abusing Rarity, she is just doing it because she can and knows she can't be stopped, and deep down, I bet almost everyone would want that power.
One question though:is Flurry in this AU actually stronger than all the princessess or is she just cocky?
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100%, she is genuinely the strongest known entity in her universe, but no one knows that except her. Her parents remember her having some pretty intense magic as a baby, but they thought she leveled out as she got older. Quite the opposite, she's only gotten stronger, and as she said, she can't even be bothered to tap into her full potential.
I'll say it like this: If she woke up tomorrow and decided to lay siege to Canterlot, Celestia could call in Luna, Twilight and the other Elements, and Discord, and she might bring them to a stalemate. If she decided to prep for maybe a month, she'd have Canterlot under her control before Celestia could send out a letter asking for backup.
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Oooookkk, that's awesome and scary at the same time
So Flurry not only can make Rarity her bitch, she can make even Twilight her pet
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She absolutely could, but she wouldn't. Not worth the effort