I do enjoy your second option maybe you can also incorporate some of the story you mentioned earlier about him traveling and going to different countries maybe you can have some females come looking for him from his earlier exploits around the world I mean he does appear to be on Unkillable immortal There’s plenty of individuals who want that power for themselves.

Yay Gabby's here, she's a precious cinnamon bun that needs to be protected.

Interesting premise but I believe a portion of the long description would fit more in a prologue.

I will wait until there are more chapters because I do like the idea, but it needs more chapters in order to see it properly.

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Got it, I put the most of the description on it, since I'm writing a new chap I didn't write a actual prologue, but it is good enough.

I like the story but holy bucko roni you need a editer otherwise good story its funny aswell

I choose The Box.

I'd love to see both assassins join permanently.

Gods bless gabby, that adorable pile of fluff

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They will probably be, maybe gonna draw them because I don't know hot to describe the type of feathers that has in their head.

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Yeah... maybe I should buy grammarly premium since it show the weird parts.

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Grammarly is good, premium should help even more, but an actual editor is still best. I suggest going on the Fimfic discord and several groups made for the purpose to find an editor or two.

Me lo voy a guardar en el poto

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huy, que rico.

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Xdxdxd

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Estaría chido que hicieras una historia de romance de humano x celestia pero larga uwu, solo inténtalo, yo lo e echo en wattpad

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Or you could just use Word or Google Drive, they have auto-correct programs already installed. I use them whenever I pre-write before posting the whole chapter here.

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sadly my pc has this weird thing were I can't be a pirate, I tried installing it but it just brakes me knees every time, Except if word online works too, then I should probably use that.

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Nah, Celestia ya recibe suficiente amor, es verdad que en español hay apenas buenos fics de ella en general, pero la verdad cada vez que escribo algo en spañol me da cringe y pierdo las ganas de escribirlo a la larga.

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Uwu ok, bueno, si quieres ir a verme en wattpad mi cuenta dioskokun111

If you need a good writing program for free, you could try LibreOffice.

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I do that too now.

But It is a pain to space it out when you paste it on fimfiction again

Reality bending? Better than Discord?