You died and now you are a weird looking bipedal goat... Also the ponys appears to be too sexist for your taste, so you run away to the griffon lands and close to the dragon lands... Now for some reason some creatures wants you dead. (RGRE)
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I'm unsure why the story is so trash, but sorry for the pain.
I don't blame you IF you went "Grogar 2.0" against everypony/everyone that either doesn't like you, or try to kill you for pathetic reasons.
It's an interesting premise and the pacing seems alright (to me at least, but I'm easy to please in that way).
You might want to get an editor to look over things though, some of the sentences show what you meant by "My English is trash be advised."
I'm looking forward to how this progresses, especially since I don't see any "dark" or "drama" tags along with the "comedy" one.
I like your story, pacing is fine. Can't wait to read more of story.
This feels like one of the reverse gender roles stories I do enjoy those quite a bit
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Agreed with that. Plus griffins do seemed to be the more human like than ponies are
That’s what I though too when I now start to think about it more
Please, PLEASE stop that, reserve the second person POV for the MAIN CHARACTER
Have some what?
so I googled 'baphomet' and I have a question, does the MC have wings?
Oof, I can't do second person pov. Otherwise, the little I could stomach seemed fine enough. Just not for me. Good luck going forward though!