Keep up the Good Work. I am really enjoying this story :)

I'm really enjoying this and this kind of reminds me of an old saying that myself and my friends created

Keep your head up and do your best with school. As for the story, doing great so far, I'm really loving it.

I forget a simple fact.
Forgiving someone doesn't mean you give them a second chance, i's not a law or anything, they should be grateful they get that.
But again doesn't mean things go back to the way they were.
Fluttershy of all people should know this, as she was the final straw to drive Sunset to try and end her life.
No it not all on her head, but she was the tipping point of a lot of crap she went through.

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What’s the saying?

“And?” Sunset raised her voice a bit, feeling her temper beginning to replace her panic, “You don't know half the shit I went through! It was way worse than anything I had ever done or what a few bitter people did after the formal. I was pushed, beated, attacked and imprisoned in a fucking locker for Celestia’s sake!” Looking into Flashs wide teary eyes the angered girl continued, “You telling me sorry for not doing shit and for only kind of believing me, doesn't make me feel any better. I’m sorry you feel guilty. Like I said, I'm ready to move on and forget about it. You should do the same.” With that the amber girl turned around and walked back into the cafeteria, walking down the center path to where her new friends were sitting, Sunset showed no problem this time glaring at anybody looking at her. Shifting her eyes to the right she looked dead at her old friends with a blank look, seeing them give her pleading looks too, Sunset looked away and sat down with her new group.

Finally she is not willing to forgive them just like not or easily

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Talk shit, get hit. So the She devils or the CMC talk shit by posting secrets that others gave them they are bound to get hit.

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Hmmm I like that saying, have you though of putting on a t-shirt yet?

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Nah I rather not dishonor my past

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Ah gotcha, but still following you

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Thank you

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Hey no problem,

On a side note, have your ever heard of a game called Tom Clancy the division perhaps?

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I have heard of it but I'm more of a World of Warships dude

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Ah, want me to link you some lore of the universe

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No thanks

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Ah gotcha. But still feel free to check my story if you want and if not or you do read it and it’s not your type of thing then that’s fine. But if I do have a warship chapter or where one of the factions has a boat then I’ll require some assistance for that

Really? Asking Sunset to be the welcoming party again after how well that went the last time?

WE STAN THE CONFIDENCE ! ! ! !!! ! !

stfu flash sentry.

honestly, my flame only left for a year of feeling shitty but its back and its stronger so CMON SUNSET LETS BOTH KICK ASS