Man, this is a good story, I can't wait for more and see what else you have.

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You're welcome to help me out with it if you like

Nice, worth waiting for!

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Maybe have Twilight and/or Fluttershy come out to see how Spike is doing, like see if he is doing ok or needs help. Maybe Twilight could, at first come over to study dragon mating habits and bring Fluttershy because she is curious about that too, but they get super turned on watching Spike, Ember, and Smolder, and because they have some romantic feelings towards Spike but we're too nervous to say anything, they decided to come over, talk to Spike and the girls and talk about starting a herd/hoard with Spike.

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We can work on it and send each other private messages of our work on the next chapter.

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I don't really know how to send private messages

I don’t really like how this is going

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That's because you were hoping Ember would grow ginormous and swallow Smolder

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Or shove her head into her snatch and smolder would be unbirthed.

How about also adding Ocellus.

A changedling who isn'exactly sure which species she identifies with the most but was, at this very moment, giving being a dragon a shot. Unforunatelly, she just happened to accompany Smolder to the dragonlands during mating season.

Smolder: "Guess I sorta forgot about mating season. Oh well, since we're already here this might be a good opportunity to get you out of your shell."

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Go to the mail with the letter symbol on the author's profile

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Cringe

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What's so cringe about it

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Not so much the content, more the passive-aggressiveness towards you. 'I don't like where this is going', not revealing the subtext of them trying to get you to add specific fetishes, and apparently not being happy you didn't add them. Dunno why people seem to keep thinking that sort of aloofness is anything but cringe

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Would you like to help me write the next chapter for Less cringe?

Been enjoying this story so far, though I think chapter 4 suffers from a few pacing issues that probably could have been resolved if it had either been stretched out and gone on a bit longer than the previous chapters or split into 2 separate chapters. The resolution feels like it could have been a chapter by itself and likely something built up to, as things were it felt like everything was rushed for the sake of getting to the threesome instead of probably taking a little more time to focus on Spike & Ember as well as her initial plans for him and the consequences of him & Smolder ruining those plans and "defying" her.

That said I am really looking forward to the next chapter and seeing what comes next =3

I don’t mind it as is…if you’re looking for “material”. If as a read alone, it does suffer a bit. But overall a good story to tell and I do hole more of this comes out. But I am personally fine with anything and everything the author would put because this is their story, not mine, or any other persons. Theirs. So if they put things into the story I may hate, I’ll read it once, but then never again.

I hope anyone and everyone reading this stays safe, has fun, takes care of themselves, remembers to smile, and…has a good time reading this.

Wow I love estrus stories