Yes, yes, yes! I've been eagerly awaiting this chapter for a while now. Getting to see it now just made my evening
I've gotta say it was pretty good. I really liked the beginning and the whole party scene. Felt pretty bad for Rainbow Dash
It feels like this story's a lot more about Rainbow Dash and AppleJack than I originally thought it'd be. But I'm not complaining. Keep up the good work! Can't wait for the next chapter!
I liked this, I was a bit confused at the amount of rainbow dash and applejack, but then I realized this wasn't a one shot, and was very delighted! Eagerly awaiting next update
"Now that I think about it, I also remember feelin' a pair o' hooves on my flank when Pinkie Pie was marchin' down the street with all those instruments durin' the parasprite invasion. Do you remember that?"
THANK YOU. Someone remembers that! Dash completely drapes herself all over AJ, and no one bats an eyelash. I mean, that's like ship-material prime right there!
I have literally grabbed a bag of popcorn to read this new chapter
God I less than three your stories! Another totally awesome chapter
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What better way to continue a story that's gone months without an update than with an awesome chapter on 11k words?
"[ie conga line!" -
"Her back were starting to ache" -
"visit the dry cleaners" - Did you miss an apostrophe?
Awesome, thanks for pointing those out for me!
Yes, yes, yes! I've been eagerly awaiting this chapter for a while now. Getting to see it now just made my evening
I've gotta say it was pretty good. I really liked the beginning and the whole party scene. Felt pretty bad for Rainbow Dash
It feels like this story's a lot more about Rainbow Dash and AppleJack than I originally thought it'd be. But I'm not complaining. Keep up the good work! Can't wait for the next chapter!
It's back! And it's awesome! Huzzah!
I liked this, I was a bit confused at the amount of rainbow dash and applejack, but then I realized this wasn't a one shot, and was very delighted!
Eagerly awaiting next update
I read, and really enjoyed, The Rainbow Effect. This sequel is shaping up to be of similar caliber.
Wow. I was waiting to say 'Where's Trixie, by the end of the second chapter of this Twixie story?'. But looks like you fit it in after all.
Now, what's happening? Seems to be about a month since you've posted anything, let alone a chapter of Twilight Effect.
Arrgh, I know! I can't figure out what's happening. -_-
I'm struggling, give me a bit.
THANK YOU. Someone remembers that!
Dash completely drapes herself all over AJ, and no one bats an eyelash. I mean, that's like ship-material prime right there!
(to below)I did realize. Also these mares are more or less adults right? So why are they talking about sleepovers? Parties, I get it but sleepovers?