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Don't tell me? Is he/"you" gonna be a "antagonist" on the ponies eyes? Due to a very stupid misunderstanding, or on purpose?
We got something to hear on the first chapter seems good so far
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Mebe, Mebe not Uwu
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You mean, "maybe"?
it's a pretty generic start, which isn't bad in itself, however, I do suggest trying to break up your paragraphs more. Large textwalls are somewhat more difficult to read.
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Thanks for the heads up, I type on computer so it looks allot different for me! I'll do a bit of a touch up today!
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its massive blocks on computer as well. You should take a look at some of the more popular fics on the site to try to figure out the formatting. If nothing else, look up the fimfiction discord and ask someone for help in the writing-help chat. They gave me a crash course, just make sure to listen to them if you ask for help.
So, they rebranded the Summer Sun Celebration, then? Because that’s an all night party occurring over the night of the summer solstice (which marks the start of summer). You know, the one culminating in Ol’ Helioplot lofting her gasball into view in front of the crowd?
Ok, bring on the conquests! I’m ready for your path of glory.
Me, on the verge of making an immature joke
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“Yet another fine edition to the many others within his grim collection”.
Fine edition may work in this context but I believe you probably meant “fine addition” as in adding something to a group.
Other than that, great opening. I look forward to reading the rest
Not bad can't wait to see what you do with this.
"I must not Cringe. Cringe is the mind-killer. Cringe is the little-death that brings total obliteration. I will face my Cringe. I will permit it to pass over me and through me. And when it has gone past I will turn the inner eye to see its path. Where the Cringe has gone there will be nothing. Only Based will remain."
-some cringelord, probably.
this story is interesting didn't think i would like it but now i don't want to stop reading it