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I don’t wanna sound like I’m criticizing, but why is all of your dialogue in italics?
Can you grind meat on those abs
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Ah my bad, old habit of mine when I type in my journal ^^;
Thanks T-B for another great chapter. You've got my interest thus far and I'm excited to see what happens next. Good luck with your next chapter, and as always have fun writing.
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Aw thanks, that means allot!
Honestly, I'd prefer if this was a slice of life, where him being OP was something John treated as a disability, and it followed him in his life of trying not to fuck up with his stupid powers.
The setup at the start, where the author character thinks his old writing is cringey, won't be worth much if once he gets the powerset, he immediately fails to follow through and starts power tripping.