Rainbow Dash has been protecting the city of Manehatten as a hero for some time, but her temporary job seemingly takes a turn when her biological impulses decide to enter the playing field. Surely she can handle a little heat...right?
This is probably my favorite mind control clopfic in the site right now. All others either have unsatisfying clop, cop out endings that wuss out on the premise at the last second, or end up trying to craft some long epic that ends up making the premise stale. This was just about perfect for fans of this sort of thing and I really hope you go through with a sequal.
11251323 You might try Firesight's story Midnight Rising and its sequel. Those are pretty good as well and I think they're actually better then this one.
Jokes aside, sorry if this entry felt a bit rushed.
Your writing is many things, dude, but "rushed" is not one of them! Smutfics of this length are rare, much less those that maintain their spark for all 60k+ words.
I said in my previous comment that I wished RD's corruption was more dragged-out, and boy-oh-boy, did the rest of the fic deliver. Chapter 7 is my new favorite for that very reason. I also noticed and appreciated the reference to Welost's other pic in Chapter 6.3.
Canon ending is my favorite. I'll definitely be checking out any sequels that come out. You should be proud, dude - this is a crazy achievement for a first fic.
11251036 Thankfully, I’m going to have quite a lot of time to think up ideas and concepts for Twilight. Mainly because, spoiler alert, she’ll be the last one (of the Mane 6)
Lovely as always!
Do you have any plans regarding what to do with Spike? It'd be kind of hard to do much to Twilight without doing something about him.
This is probably my favorite mind control clopfic in the site right now. All others either have unsatisfying clop, cop out endings that wuss out on the premise at the last second, or end up trying to craft some long epic that ends up making the premise stale. This was just about perfect for fans of this sort of thing and I really hope you go through with a sequal.
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You might try Firesight's story Midnight Rising and its sequel. Those are pretty good as well and I think they're actually better then this one.
Your writing is many things, dude, but "rushed" is not one of them! Smutfics of this length are rare, much less those that maintain their spark for all 60k+ words.
I said in my previous comment that I wished RD's corruption was more dragged-out, and boy-oh-boy, did the rest of the fic deliver. Chapter 7 is my new favorite for that very reason. I also noticed and appreciated the reference to Welost's other pic in Chapter 6.3.
Canon ending is my favorite. I'll definitely be checking out any sequels that come out. You should be proud, dude - this is a crazy achievement for a first fic.
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not gonna lie, reading this comment has me smiling like an idiot. thanks man, I really appreciate it, genuinely
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Thankfully, I’m going to have quite a lot of time to think up ideas and concepts for Twilight. Mainly because, spoiler alert, she’ll be the last one (of the Mane 6)
This whole story is incredible! If you are making sequels, please do so! But take your time. Don't rush them! Make them as good as you can!
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Awww thank you! Sequels in the works, but it’ll be a while! Got other stories coming.