A veteran soldier from a broken planet, born in service and fighting for his species, now lost, sucked into a world of peace and prosperity. Wonder what will happen?
For a short moment, nothing happened but the continuing eerie silence. Grey was left with his thoughts in his mind; once again, no matter how much he hated to admit it, this xen- 'pony' was right, but why should he dare continue cooperating or even listening to it. It took his gear and defiled the fallen Kreigsmen's grave to achieve its own "peace." He slowly sighed and shook his head from right to left a few times, outright refusing Celestia's plea.
they did WHAT! execute them execpt for ;una for heresy and disrespect now!
"If you two would be so kind, I'd like the return of only his sword and if possible my wargear and possessions... please, or if better, assistance for a proper burial for the fallen Kriegsmen, they deserve more as they have had similar to worse experiences as Cadia did, it is only fair to give them the proper rest than within a forest. And..." He said as both sister's moods brightened and looked up to him in a bit of confusion and hearing him sigh and looked to be in thought.
finally becuase well their soldiers are teenagers and know only war. So thank you author.
Before them stood on two legs and in nothing but khaki pants and shirt, with clunky brown boots, he wore two shackles with broken chains and orange painted lines across them. Its hand looked scared from deep burns but held his hands clenched tightly as his face was barren of any fur, less from the thin fuzz on the top of its head topped by the brown line of a mohawk. It suffered the same scares as its hands, and a large gash cut the stretched over its left eye and exposed its teeth.
Its "scarred" not "scared" I noticed you kept making the same spelling error.
"What if I tried to kill you here, right here? I know damn well it would make me look evil in all of your eyes, but... If I were to say: I'd gun you'd down right here, every single one of you. And watched you all die, tell me... would you all feel fear for me, or rise up and try to kill me?"
https://youtu.be/E8eBdZR0Qeo I believe there is a reference Also someone probably noticed and made a comment before me, but I'm not reading all that, so deal with it
they did WHAT!
execute them execpt for ;una for heresy and disrespect now!
finally becuase well their soldiers are teenagers and know only war. So thank you author.
I guess its a primace of sorts maybe huors?
also anyone who needs the song I'll link it right here below. Take a listen its really good and cacthy
nicely done and interesting logo but hasn't the chapter a name before?
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Couldn't think of a name so call it how you feel for it XD
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i just ask as when i got the notification, it said the name was "Repentance for Redemption"
Well this turned out well and Im looking forward to seeing more and where things go from here
Its "scarred" not "scared" I noticed you kept making the same spelling error.
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Thanks, English ain't my strongest language
https://youtu.be/E8eBdZR0Qeo
I believe there is a reference
Also someone probably noticed and made a comment before me, but I'm not reading all that, so deal with it