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Dr K-MoonShard
SWAWS, just another quirked up nerd making shit, so I maybe coated in more shit, want to read a bad story? My Patreon
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And. Here. We. GO!
Can’t wait for more!
You could have linked it to me in the pm.
But this looks much better!
Wait is this the rewrite to your first one?
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Yes
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Oh okay thank you
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Youre welcome. I was told, same guy and such, just different name
Just hoping it stays more coherent this time, if we can stick to linear time this should rock.
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I assume so just thought it be a differenet cadian soldier from a different world
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mhm
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I just thought it was a re wrote but didn’t say the rewrite in the title
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yeah
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Also which is your favorite army of 40k? Mine are the Death Korps of Kreig
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well, me as well, mostly die to the german orgin and apperence. IN fact, i have myself a wh40k story planned, where krieg would take a support role
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let me know when it comes out
Also I am working on a Tom Clancy division fanfic
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CADIA STANDS! THE PLANET BROKE BEFORE THE GUARD!
>Abadon the disposaler
LMAO
glad to help
How did he get a shovel from a kreigmen?
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He “Borrowed” it
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I know he “borrowed” it but exactly where and when did he “borrowed” the shovel from?
Also like the new cover art
Also why did you decide to rewrite your lost cadian story?
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No offense mate, but your proof reading leaves something to be desired.
Still a good chapter regardless!
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Well, no one is perfect, besides, english ain't my first language either
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Time will tell as more of the story will unfold, only hint I can give is: “Greed is a nasty sin, but yet sometimes it comes in handy.”
And, thank you. I do art only as a hobby myself but this one I used my actual figure of kasrkin as a reference.
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Lack of info, and above all to much to handle and quick paces, so much that it could give an Inquisitor a stroke, I decided to dial it back restart and take it in a nice and slow easy to remember pace, it helps a lot and eases events and scenes in for memorial scenes to catch up or even join in.
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Oh okay
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Oh okay thank you and nice
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In all means of no offense but if any comments about proofreading, please direct them towards me as I did ask bronycommander to proofread this, but if you wish to volunteer yourself in proofreading this story or just a chapter, then I will gladly accept and will give shoutouts and proper credit to those who help the progression of the story or chapter, I do hope it is for the benefit for others sakes to enjoy this story as just a good read, thank you for your feedback and comment along with like it is appreciated.
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Oh do you know who will be in the herd or still planning on it or who will be in it?
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As the orkz would put it from the snakbitz clan “oight boyz’ iz gotz a plan, a weird plan at dat.”
(”Alright boys, I got a plan, a weird one at that.”)
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Oh okay continue with your work guardsmen, emperor be with you
Considering his location and the level of development, he should probably ask what the latest important invention their species has made. Once they answered he'd probably start to realize that they haven't ever actually left their planet and are completely ignorant.
Hey no worry’s we understand. Also like the drawing in the author comments at the bottom.
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I agree with you on that
Well at least we now know what the Kreigmen guardsmen name was at least
I did for sure and interesting pic at the end.
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Indeed, a classic, is it not?
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It is indeed a classic
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Mhm
I have to admit this is not bad, thou I think it would of been better if the mlp locals where more humanoid lik being anthros but thats just me and again pretty good and has potential
The Following song May be good for a battle scene https://youtu.be/3zOAm8i19_Q
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Not bad, not bad at all, maybe for later on, but I’ll keep that, for later
Youre welcome, glad to help
Great chapter
The machine god agrees with that statement
Always though they ate something other than corpse starch.
Huh the more you know
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Trivia question:
What would ork or Tryanid meat taste like if properly cooked?
I really appreciate the shout out! And in comparison to previous chapters this one is actually extremely well written. Especially as an audio reader the previous chapters had areas where I essentially forced a period. But this one had great end points! The dialog felt great and I like the PTSD tip your going on. Would definitely hit a Guardman who thought there planet was destroyed and they are cursed with living. Excited to see and voice more of your work!
*shudder* much as I adore Luna and respect her Lack of compromise for her duty as Princess of the night, I wouldn’t want her in my head either. There are just places that are too sacred to enter and your mind is one of them.
Besides, if I remember right Phykers can get into your mind and break you on a mental level.