A veteran soldier from a broken planet, born in service and fighting for his species, now lost, sucked into a world of peace and prosperity. Wonder what will happen?
"By the emperor, if the machanicus were on this world, they would have a field day along with even the pykers of the guard getting headaches. This is a feudal world, but one where its technology is more confusing than repairing a damn power Power Cogitator."
I really appreciate the shout out! And in comparison to previous chapters this one is actually extremely well written. Especially as an audio reader the previous chapters had areas where I essentially forced a period. But this one had great end points! The dialog felt great and I like the PTSD tip your going on. Would definitely hit a Guardman who thought there planet was destroyed and they are cursed with living. Excited to see and voice more of your work!
*shudder* much as I adore Luna and respect her Lack of compromise for her duty as Princess of the night, I wouldn’t want her in my head either. There are just places that are too sacred to enter and your mind is one of them.
Besides, if I remember right Phykers can get into your mind and break you on a mental level.
11260830 As spy said in tf2 from meet the pyro: “One shudders to imagine what inhumane thoughts lie behind that mask.”
And yes psyker can break you down mentally or just blow you up from the inside out just by a thought, or any ing that can kill you... Cause “WOOSH MAGIC”. Just not magic of friendship lol
Wouldn’t the magic of friendship be worse? I mean it seems to have a Warp-esk corruption effect, like it alters the mind at a subconscious level or outright strips you of anything it considers “Non-Harmonic” when enhanced via the EoH!
Glad you like it and thanks for your feedback appreciate it, be sure to check out its sequel that will be more on sharing info of 40k and a little bit more cringie stupid humorous with little on the dark/ serious moments.
Youre welcome, glad to help
Great chapter
The machine god agrees with that statement
Always though they ate something other than corpse starch.
Huh the more you know
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Trivia question:
What would ork or Tryanid meat taste like if properly cooked?
I really appreciate the shout out! And in comparison to previous chapters this one is actually extremely well written. Especially as an audio reader the previous chapters had areas where I essentially forced a period. But this one had great end points! The dialog felt great and I like the PTSD tip your going on. Would definitely hit a Guardman who thought there planet was destroyed and they are cursed with living. Excited to see and voice more of your work!
*shudder* much as I adore Luna and respect her Lack of compromise for her duty as Princess of the night, I wouldn’t want her in my head either. There are just places that are too sacred to enter and your mind is one of them.
Besides, if I remember right Phykers can get into your mind and break you on a mental level.
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As spy said in tf2 from meet the pyro:
“One shudders to imagine what inhumane thoughts lie behind that mask.”
And yes psyker can break you down mentally or just blow you up from the inside out just by a thought, or any ing that can kill you... Cause “WOOSH MAGIC”. Just not magic of friendship lol
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Wouldn’t the magic of friendship be worse? I mean it seems to have a Warp-esk corruption effect, like it alters the mind at a subconscious level or outright strips you of anything it considers “Non-Harmonic” when enhanced via the EoH!
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Good theory and question
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The least said about Cadances Love Magic the better *shudders*
So far I've really liked this story. Good job!
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Glad you like it and thanks for your feedback appreciate it, be sure to check out its sequel that will be more on sharing info of 40k and a little bit more cringie stupid humorous with little on the dark/ serious moments.
Wait till the ponies find out humanity is a bunch of cannibals