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I'm not going to leave a rating, but I just came in to say that I'm surprised your story didn't do well, as for some reason beyond my comprehension, people on this site actually enjoy self-insert nonsense.
You should already be featured considering the amount of stories similar to this that make it into the box.
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No no, I personally think it's fine. It's like you just said, it does get worse before it gets better, and I think it really works.
Most self-insert stories or most stories like a self-insert start off with things getting better, there's a small issue that escalates and gets worse, then by the end, it gets resolved and the story strengthens itself.
Your story started it off at a down-note, and I think it makes your story really good, cause it does what so many self-insert stories don't do... it starts with the problem. And as you said, it's gonna get worse before it can get better, and once I read the next few chapters, I think I'm gonna be right.
This wasn't a foolish choice, this is a choice you made, and I personally think you made the right choice.
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I think they don't like my punctuation.
J/K, I can only speculate. But thank you for taking the time to comment!! I'm not going to give up yet.