Cute and adorable chapter. Now that Chris' mother and father are here, what will their noble title be? I'm hoping for duke and duchess or Prince's mother and father (it's a variation of Queen's Mother and Father which means they are the parents of the current ruler not the ones Ruling. I think that is the highest title they can have without becoming rulers themselves) so since Chris is the current ruler along with Celestia and Luna, becoming the Prince's mother and father would be the highest noble rank they are entitled to have if they want it. Though what do you think? I look forward to your next chapter
11299624 I thought their meeting with Sunset couldn't have been any better. It was prefect. As for them learning about his past life: I think you explore it more with him and his human parents it will help them bond and help them adapt more to Equestria and it's inhabitants and the world they now find themselves in as well as increasing their understanding. Plus I want to see them spoil the crap out of Sunset and doting on here like real grandparents.
I really quite liked this story up to this point, keep up the good work. and this chapter, over 2000 words, my initial criticism of Archangel Father.
It warmed my heart to see Chris's parents meeting both Celly and Sunset, and I look forward to see more of this, as well Alone No More, and the Robocop story mentioned on your Schedule.
11300031 I quite like it so far. Sunset either being partially or fully not pony has been a trope I enjoy seeing explored.
As far as the meeting between CHris's Parents and Sunset? Assuming Lil' Miss Bacon Hair's Mirror takes her to the same world Chris is from, there's a good chance Chris's parents may have already seen her around Canterlot city.
Though, with the revelation that his full name is Crystal Justice I am wondering if there are any connection the My Little Pony: A Lost Heir series by WildWPony which deal with the son of Princess Celestia and a human, whom also has the last name Justice. Granted that story and it's sequel are rather porned out and thankfully this one is not..
Maybe some revelation of the fact she's not entirely pony might be good?
Also I noticed that in a previous chapter that Celestia mentioned Sunset was born an Alicorn but took away her wings?
Chris has his happy ending. He's got his future wife, his daughter, his parents, Celly's parents.
There's no connection to his story. It's actually a remake of the original by Zamairiac. He didn't want to continue it so I asked him if I could and he let me.
heh. talk about a crazy meet up.
Cute and adorable chapter. Now that Chris' mother and father are here, what will their noble title be? I'm hoping for duke and duchess or Prince's mother and father (it's a variation of Queen's Mother and Father which means they are the parents of the current ruler not the ones Ruling. I think that is the highest title they can have without becoming rulers themselves) so since Chris is the current ruler along with Celestia and Luna, becoming the Prince's mother and father would be the highest noble rank they are entitled to have if they want it. Though what do you think? I look forward to your next chapter
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They are Duke and Duchess.
Also, what do you think of them meeting Sunset?
What's your take on when Chris's parents learn about his previous life? Do you think I told it well or should I work on it?
Oh hey, it got updated
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Yeah, it did.
What do you think?
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I thought their meeting with Sunset couldn't have been any better. It was prefect. As for them learning about his past life: I think you explore it more with him and his human parents it will help them bond and help them adapt more to Equestria and it's inhabitants and the world they now find themselves in as well as increasing their understanding. Plus I want to see them spoil the crap out of Sunset and doting on here like real grandparents.
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Norman and Samantha will also meet Luna, Cadance and Twilight.
You asked me to give feedback and I shall.
I really quite liked this story up to this point, keep up the good work. and this chapter, over 2000 words, my initial criticism of Archangel Father.
It warmed my heart to see Chris's parents meeting both Celly and Sunset, and I look forward to see more of this, as well Alone No More, and the Robocop story mentioned on your Schedule.
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What do you think of it so far?
What did you think when Sunset meets her human grandparents?
What did you think when Chris and Celestia explained about Chris's past life as a soldier and his death?
Thank you, that means a lot to me.
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I quite like it so far. Sunset either being partially or fully not pony has been a trope I enjoy seeing explored.
As far as the meeting between CHris's Parents and Sunset? Assuming Lil' Miss Bacon Hair's Mirror takes her to the same world Chris is from, there's a good chance Chris's parents may have already seen her around Canterlot city.
Though, with the revelation that his full name is Crystal Justice I am wondering if there are any connection the My Little Pony: A Lost Heir series by WildWPony which deal with the son of Princess Celestia and a human, whom also has the last name Justice. Granted that story and it's sequel are rather porned out and thankfully this one is not..
Maybe some revelation of the fact she's not entirely pony might be good?
Also I noticed that in a previous chapter that Celestia mentioned Sunset was born an Alicorn but took away her wings?
Chris has his happy ending. He's got his future wife, his daughter, his parents, Celly's parents.
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Cool
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Thank you, that means a lot.
There's no connection to his story. It's actually a remake of the original by Zamairiac. He didn't want to continue it so I asked him if I could and he let me.
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He also has his soon-to-be sister-in-law and his soon-to-be mother-in-law and father-in-law Galaxia and Cosmos.
And he also has his niece Cadance, his niece-in-law Twilight and his nephew-in-law Shining Armor.
Let me explain the relationships.
Sunset is Cadance, Twilight's and Shining Armor's cousin. This makes Velvet and Night Light her aunt-in-law and uncle-in law.
Chris's parents would be Cadance, Twilight's and Shining Armor's great-uncle and great-aunt in-law.
Chris and Celestia are fiances to one another.
Luna is the sister-in-law to Chris, which makes Norman and Samantha her mother-in law and father-in-law.
The same thing goes for Celestia's relationship with them.
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And for Sunset knowing of the human world. That'd be wrong.
Chris is from our Earth. This reality. Not a real person, but you get what I mean, right?