She appeared as if from nowhere, a dark shadowed figure full of dread magic. Shining Armor and Cadance scowled with apprehension, but her attention was on the _other_ shadowy overlord that stood before her. Only one could remain.
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Caught a few places with the wrong name.
calmly
Who is that?
The best slave is the one not knowing it.
A good servant is a satisfied servant.
Great minions are treated well and are rewarded if they earned it.
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Fixed!
It makes sense, if you think about it.
Blueblood spends all his day being in charge, at least on paper. How much must he want, if only ever so often and not for very long, to not be in charge?
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Wait, did we just learn her character inspiration?
C'mon, Morning. EVERYPONY wants to be held! Ask Cadence!
Well I must say, this isn't at all the direction I expected...and yet it makes so much sense!
I also love Night learning from Morning - as she learned from Umbra - that those who are willing and treated firmly but fairly follow more readily. The way Night Terror knows to do it, it's probably a continuous struggle to keep them...whereas Morning's way, she seems to barely have to work at all.
Blueblood does have iron discipline, it’s rather impressive.
I don't know either Celestia want to scold Morning or thank her for disciple her insufferable nephew?
I have been enjoying the story until the inclusion of Morning Dew. Umbra was an Umbrum, but it never felt like it. Nurturing Morning like this feels wrong. The story feels completely sidelined to teach Morning how to be evil. And yes, the nature of Umbrum is evil. Mind control, inducing nightmares, squeezing pain for sustenance? Evil. I don't like what happened to this story. Umbra was so happy and positive. Everything with Morning Dew isn't that.
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You lost me. Umbrum have dark arts. Umbra has dark arts. Neither Umbra nor Morning Dew have used these dark arts to torture anypony. She is a nightmare, but she is also not really evil. What one is and what one does are two different things.