10935086 I should do a series of short vignettes between characters. Limit it to 500 words or so. Not a hard limit, but a limit. There needs to be context and characterization though... Hmm... Thanks for the comment!
I don't quite get the "she's not doing anything" angle because it's kind of like that in the show and she still gets celebrated as the friendship pony. The only way Twilight is allowed to solve problems personally is if it's a friendship laser.
10935114 I approve of a few Omake if you think there is room for them. Its on theme in my eyes, and a little more perspective in a tight story like this could be nice, even if only a handful of paragraphs each.
ROFL this chapter though short was amazing
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I should do a series of short vignettes between characters. Limit it to 500 words or so. Not a hard limit, but a limit. There needs to be context and characterization though... Hmm... Thanks for the comment!
I don't quite get the "she's not doing anything" angle because it's kind of like that in the show and she still gets celebrated as the friendship pony. The only way Twilight is allowed to solve problems personally is if it's a friendship laser.
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I approve of a few Omake if you think there is room for them. Its on theme in my eyes, and a little more perspective in a tight story like this could be nice, even if only a handful of paragraphs each.