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Is this based on that one reddit post i saw?
Pretty good so far. Nice introductory chapter.
You can't. You're perfect.
Wrong time - the rest of the story is written in the past. Other that that tho? Nothing I can find.
This story is so awesome! First chapter and I’m already all in.
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Always surprised when Celestia is an incompetent ruler. She has more than a millennium of experience in reign.
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I don't believe I painted her as such, but I'm sorry if it felt this way. ^///^;
I like to think she isn't incompetent; simply a pony, just like everyone else. Most of her affairs are in order - but there's simply a lot on her plate, and she is usually required for many events. I believe I wrote her more realistic in the sequel.
Ok, just finished this chapter, and I gotta say, the writing is just *mwah!* nicely done.
Usually it's takes me about 2 or more chapters to convince me to either read it or not, but you just got me hooked up by the early half of the first chapter.
Definitely gonna put this in my favorites.
Well written with a good pacing.
I will keep reading anf see where it goes