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shame these guy will have to split up one twilight leaves :c
Yeah, proper accuracy with a bow takes a good bit of practice. Kind of wish he knew combat archery, because it's completely different from hunting archery.
I will start by saying that I don't dislike the story so far. But because of the pacing and the focus on the guard training I really haven't felt engaged with it. I feel like Honey Rose is mostly forgotten. Luna feels fairly OOC with how excitable and energetic she is. I've been reading more out of obligation than desire. I'm more interested in his interpersonal relationships than him being a guard. I tried to stick it out but I've just lost interest. I guess I just want more slice of life, romance and drama.
Celestia, the whole purpose MC inquired about personal guards was in the context of budgetary issues. You and Luna listed the financial knifes edge your country is walking right now due to the last 2-3 years since Twilight first left for Ponyville.
She could just set it aside and call it his “discretionary guarding budget” for his “station” and his permission to let Luna have some advisory role to help him acclimate with your economy. At least then, he could say he’s donating his salary and you can say he’s getting paid. Win-win.