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Some people really need to learn to appreciate a thicc figure.
While I do like that he’s open for second chances with Honey, I don’t like that he’s like “My fault.” when Celestia tells him of Honey’s letter. He shouldn’t be taking the blame for her rude behavior.
Also, what is up with Luna and Celestia? Reading that last part feels... weird.
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I'm not an expert at writing. I do try my best; but keep in mind that this isn't going to be 100% show accurate work.
Poor Arin, caught amongst the sister rivalry so soon
The cake scene... dude, you're a genius on writing humor.
It like a fine example of 'Show, not Tell' comedy, well executed.
For Arin and Honey's interaction... dunno, both at fault?
Arin was too bluntly expressing his disliking, being to rude, and Honey was being too much... Honey, to a degree of not considering his reactions, leading him to act that way.
Why they acted that way is reasonable and understandable, and they both should have adjusted a little for the other.
Cake scene im crying from laughter
Wonderful haha. i grinned so much. Lovely to see this story has so many silly and wholesome scenes
You already said that.
As a former slave of 30 years, MC ought have no experience with the concept of ‘personal space.’ Unless his home world had some decorum for Inerts? But that seems unlikely as his king was so wanton about considering his execution just to make things simpler for the surviving Ascended.
That’s some extreme cravings, Princess. To carelessly suggest regicide for sugar is not very pony.