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Me Bucking Gusta. Need more.
Is it wrong of me to want Melody to commit wincest?
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It might not be wrong of you, but it would be wrong of the story. Not gonna happen :3
1540168 commence side story!
Just so everyone knows, the second song was going to be great, and catchy and an all around improvement to the chapter, but Loyal refused to put it in... *sigh*
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You bastard >.>
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(this was it)
NEED THE NEXT CHAPTER NOW
PONIES
GAH
OMG FAVORITE SONG OF ALL TIME EVAR
Seether- Broken (feat. Amy Lee of Evanescence) off of their album Disclaimer II
I squee'd harder than a 6 year old girl meeting Santa.
This entire chapter made me lol, especially:
Melody: "Don’t make me beg. I’ll totally beg.”
Lily: “Fuck that, I’m begging.”
Twi: “Okay, I LIKE The sight of Lily begging. My own daughter is just weird."
Prepare for aweshum lesbian sex scene!
yay awesome
r u gonna add something about the `milk` commotion in the near future?
don´t know why, but it seams like that could be hilarious
Great chapter here, character development progressing nicely. The musical interlude was a nice upbeat change from the past few chapters, you sure know how to keep the flow of a story going.
Side note I noticed a few times in this chapter where you used Lily when I'm sure you meant Melody.
'Recounting the exact death of each individual was difficult for Lily. Particularly the ones she couldn’t save. '
OK after re-reading I think this is the only one. Could be wrong but just trying to help.
Goddamnit... I just realized that Lilly got this word from Maggie. Gaddamnit... the feels... I seriously have tears in my eyes right now...