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Too bad I only have Word. I certainly have the free time, just not the tools required. Ah well, maybe someone else will be able to do it.
Sadly don't play Wow. Seems like it would be fun to play with the Authors.
Hah. RP sound fun.
Story Comment:
SPITFIRE!![:rainbowderp:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowderp.png)
OH FUCK, SPITFIRE! Although, knowing your affinity for cliff hangers, she will be wounded, but she will not die. And that's not an assumption. She. Will. Not. Die.
As for Dash, I never said she was strait, I just said that Noth will be primarily male. So far, you have given no indication otherwise.
And while I would love to proof read for you, I am not 18, only 17. oddly enough, where i'm from, legal age of consent is 16, so i'm still legal
You did not just kill off Spitfire
YOU DID NOT JUST FUCKING KILL OFF SPITFIRE!![:flutterrage:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/flutterrage.png)
I was just about to leave a positive comment here, but you don't get to have it anymore![:twilightangry2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightangry2.png)
Sexy time. Check
Beloved characters possibly dying. (Please see 'Rarity') Check
Some other shit. Check
Cliffhanger. Check
This gonna get good.
If I had an attention span larger than that of a gnat, I'd gladly proofread for you. However, that isn't the case. What is the case is that you are an awesome doucher with your cliffhangers. I love/hate you loyal.
On to the rest of things!
The clop in this chapter was really well done (and not over the top), especially the build up. It was enough to hint at what was coming, but it wasn't overwhelmingly obvious. The comraderie afterwards was a good, and hilarious, touch too. One question: if the gods of the winds are so powerful, as we have seen, why don't the two of them team up with Luna and Celestia and just wipe Chryssy's forces off of the map? Sure it would take some doing, but four aincent and powerful beings that can on their own demolish legions upon legions of changelings by themselves would be well up to the task IMHO. Or is this the plan all along, just on a larger scale including ALL of the gods of old?
Dude, NO!!! you can't kill spitfire!!!
if she dies, I'll...I'll... I'll hate you forever! no, 4eva!!! And I'll *sob* I-I-I'll un like all your stufffff... Spitfire can't die! she has to be saved somehow!
please... you already butchered Rarity. you can't rob me Spitfire too...
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Honestly, starting to get a little tired of readers threatening to unlike because of character deaths. If you're still here after motherfucking Rarity and Nyralith, chances are you're in it for the long haul. And you thought Spitfire was bad? Wait until next chapter.
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Why?! what have you done with the nice young man who filled my heart with joy and my brain with awesome changling whore smutt? I don't like this new Loyal.
Y must all my secondary favorites have to die? I swear to Luna if Derpy dies, I will go Liam Nelson on ur scrawny ... loyal... ass...
can't insult anons.
Oh, and I'm here cause I don't give two bits about Rarity. It's sad, but you "fixed" it. in all honesty, she's really annoying.
1394312 Besides, Rarity died awesomely. I mean, she butchered thousands
she shaved limbs off of CHRYSALIS herself before she was mauled. It was Legen- wait for it- dary!
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look, you're either trolling the fuck out of me or being overly dramatic about reading. If you don't like where the story's going, you don't have to read. But this was the direction my sister wanted this story to go. Pardon me for attempting to honor her memory by staying true to her heart.
Let me apologize now. I'm very tired, very sick, and very stressed. I'm struggling to shit with the newest chapter, and facing a LOT of stress with the stupid fucking Cloptober. I'm sorry if I seem uncaring or angry. Losing readers is one of my biggest fears.
But at the same time, the story is going where it's going, like it or not. Either stop reading and break my over-stressed, depressed little heart
or sit down, shut up, and shed some tears for the next two chapters.
p.s. I'm anything but scrawny
p.p.s. Typed on my phone. Sorry for inconsistencies.
p.p.p.s. Seriously sick and stressed, so I'm sorry.