Typos in the title are doubleplus ungood. (Til) should be (Till), or just (Until), and only in certain specific cases, ('til).
Yes, I know there's one less (L) in until, but the reason why (til) is improper is because (till) came before (until), and they both mean the same thing for some reason, so there's no correct way to shorten (until) except with an apostrophe (i.e 'til). Generally, if you just want something shorter, you just use "till", which is the older word, unless you're trying to convey an accent in dialogue, in such event you would use the apostrophe'd version.

Sorry if this explantion is confusing, but I'm drunk, and drunk me likes to flex over archaic English grammar for some reason.

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I'm glad that's the worst so far!

Мне ошибки не страшны, мне всë переводит гугл на странице. А вообще мне всë нравится, только слегка огорчила такая реакция на прошлое Алекса, я это не осуждаю, мне всë нравится. Пока мне интересно, где он (помимо того, что в эквестрии. )

Great chapter

Other than a misspell on 'Crystal' (more you like you transposed a letter to the strong spot) your doing fine in my opinion. Interesting take on things so far.

Well that was a nice read and a nice change

Interesting start. I'm looking forward to seeing where this is going to go.