Somehow, moving herself around before Scootaloo’s fuzzy brain could even come to grips with what was happening to her, Twilight managed to pull herself away from the stallion in her ass as well as from Scootaloo’s mouth. At fist, Scootaloo pined for the loss … until she found Twilight’s face right in front of her own – cheeks full and lips dripping white. Scootaloo’s mouth opened, acting purely on orgasmic instinct. That’s when Twilight kissed her.

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A most excellent chapter. Guess Chapter 4 will introducing Scootaloo to how a stallion pumping massiv amounts of Cum inside her?
Perhaps one overpowered load to her pussy until every inch of it filled and a second load in her ass without insertion...

Damn fine reading experience

Since you added this to the Rainbow Dash/Scootaloo section of the Mare on Filly group, I assume you’ll have at least one scene between the two of them on the last chapter, right? Looking forward to it if so!

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Heh, mistakes still slip in, don't they? Fixed.

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Well, it's out now -- time to find out! ^.^

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Yep -- that's basically the whole 4th chapter, and it's just now published! ^.^

Silly Scoots, need just a bit more preparation. Now you know...

I'm REALLY enjoying this, but so far THIS:

> To Spear’s credit, he stopped right away, quickly but gently pulling his cock back out of her ass. But it still hurt back there, even after he’d pulled out completely.

> Twilight teleported right in front of Scootaloo instantly, leaving the bat ponies who’d been on top of and inside her to tumble to the floor. Glimmerlight almost took a tumble, too. “Are you okay?” she asked breathlessly. “Do you want to stop?”

THAT is my favorite part.

They had already made a big deal about how they wouldn't do anything she wasn't comfortable with, and that was great, but this shows that they meant it, and stuck to it, even in an extremely heated moment.

Other fics may have gone a different route; maybe comforted her and assured her the pain would go away, taken it more gently, etc. But the amount of effort being put into establishing consent, and how they all IMMEDIATELY stop to check in the instant she displays anything other than positive enthusiasm, is REALLY doing it for me.

More of this, please.

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Glad you're liking it. ^.^

She looked over her shoulder toward the remaining bat pony guards. “Hm… Squeaks, how about you? Come on over and let’s show Scootaloo how it’s done.”

: "Make me squeak! Assuming you can..."

Scootaloo stared at the three bat pony guards who’d stepped forward one by one. They all looked nearly identical, and they all stood there, looking all official and everything, standing at attention and staring straight ahead. How was she supposed to pick just one of them? She wanted all of them – she wanted all of them equally.

: "You can have all three of them. But better not for your first time."
: "Why not? Didn't I teach you anything during out private lessons?"

What she’d done hadn’t escaped Twilight’s notice, either. Scootaloo could just barely see from the corner of her eye the way Twilight was looking at her approvingly.

: "Did you just call over one of my guards so you can suck him off?!"
: "Uhm... maybe?"
: "Scootaloo..."
: "I'm so proud of you! Carry on."

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"I'm so proud of you! Carry on."

Loving this part! ^.^

“Spear’s one of my favorites. He really knows how to spear a mare, if you know what I mean.”

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