Aw yeah! Nice story, man.

One step your journey is over another begins. I love how you let them burn the whole place down. I like how they're feeling up his muscles very good chapter

i want to see a pic of him out of armor, maybe the hot springs scene? it was highly amusing

God I just love his mentality, and I can see romance may blossom sooner than I personally thought. Love on the battlefield 👌.

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I have two that shows him without his armor. His ref sheet and a early colored sketch that shows his size compared to a normal pony. I plan to have more done but I'm currently waiting in a que for the artist. cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/801983522842607628/998962316945133689/windy_and_tenebrae.png

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Glad you're enjoying it so far! As for the romance I plan to build it up a little more in the next chapter before it starts getting serious between them.

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Thank you! I still have a ways to go but I'm glad people are enjoying it.

I can smell love, ooh this is going to be an interesting romance between the sisters and our cool protagonist

I feel bad for the workers, but Tenebrae did the smart choice of wiping every last one of them and the guards, if they escape they would probably end up telling the Arachnes about him whether they're forced or willingly worked for them. I am looking forward for the release of the next chapter.

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looks wicked!

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Ty! I'm glad you think so.

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I have to agree with the others, he looks amazing

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Thank you a lot of time and planning went into his design and the species. Is there a way to make a gallery on here? I'd be happy to show off more of his artwork and that of the story art.

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Could do a blog that you update and tag into the story description...

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That's a great idea! I'll look into doing that soon. I'll have to be careful of posting spoilers since I have a few done that concern future events in the story.

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are you going to make thestrals somehow related to bicorns or are the wings and tufted ears just coincidence

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That will be revealed in the next chapter along with the Bicorns origin and lore.

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Nice picture of the main hero he looks badass

good story can't what for the next chapter

Hooboy… That was deliciously karmic ”little” bloodbath there. Kinda reminded me about Sebas doing some rounds in a ’criminal operation’ in Overlord.

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Haha glad you enjoyed it. It was partly inspired by that episode.

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Thank you. It shouldn't be to much longer for the next chapter, it ended up being longer than I originally planned but its almost done now.

Khorne approves of the bloodshed.

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Happy to hear your enjoying it the next chapter is being a bit delayed do to some IRL stuff but it is close to being finished.

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Blood for the blood god! Skulls for the skull throne!

really hope to see an update soon

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Everyone's entitled to their opinion of course but have you read it at all? Your comment seems like you only read the brief description and assumed Tenebrae is going to conquer and unite the kingdoms through genocide and destruction. Granted I am very aware that I'm still just a novice writer so maybe something got miscommunicated but just to clarify a few points. 1. The only "innocent" ponies that Tenebrae has killed thus far was the scientists and researchers at the lab when he was initially awakened after being frozen for over 35k years and the excavation team all others were slavers and criminals. 2. I haven't even gotten to the whole conquering part yet or the reason he does so but at no point has he stated he's going to just rampage and commit genocide in order to unite everyone nor have I revealed what his plan to do so is. 3. Your assuming way to much based on events that haven't even happened yet in the story. I appreciate criticism but only when its actually about the current state/chapter of the story, not based on assumptions on stuff that hasn't even happened yet.

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Hopefully I can finish the next chapter soon, I had to take a break due to a bunch of IRL stuff that piled up which I'm almost done with finally.

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You are of course right. I wish to extend my apologies for my comment, it was honestly way out of line. I'm not going to make any excuses as to why I wrote what I wrote, but you were right in that I was making way too many assumptions based on frankly nothing. That was wrong of me. I have removed my comment. Again, I'm sorry for my behavior.