Majima Spike has been living a tough life because a lot of creatures believed that he did not have magic until he one day snaps at everyone. There are eleven girls interested in him...
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....KIRYU-CHAN!!!!
YES!!! I need this!! I will watch this story unfold with Laser Focus
I’m not 100% sure, but I think I know where you got the inspiration of this story from.
I’m sorry to say that no matter what I read I will always think Majima sounds like Mark Hamill.
Love the games, love the idea, look forward to seeing where it goes.
Even though I'm a type of guy that likes "Spike being the Main Character, and a OP Badass" Stories.
What is it with everybody ( Even the Teachers ) being total assholes/bitches to him??!!
This happened before in some "high school or super hero" stories with Spike, for some mess up reason, turns him into a "hate/despise/bully this guy magnet"??!! For nearly everyone to screw with him???!!!
This reminds me of Naruto, Harry Potter, or those OC Characters ( "Y/N" ) DXD High School/RWBY, and other Stories in Fan Fiction/Wattpad!!!!!!! Because, they literally created having " Nearly Everybody become Hateful OOC's and Despise/Hate the " Insert Main Character" ( Spike, Naruto, Harry Potter, Y/N, etc... ).
Besides the Dazzlings ( And Discord, I guess. I'm still pissed that he DOESN'T TRY to help Spike with the bullying/abuse problem???!! Or tell Celestia/Luna this?! ), ISN'T their other Students, the other Teachers, or even Celestia/Luna?! That aren't in the "Hate/Bully Spike" Mob, and actually be more friendly to him??!!
Like have the Young Six show up, and be friends to him??!! Or bring Pipsqueak, Button Mash, Snips and Snails again, or even have Sunset/Fluttershy/or Pinkie Pie be on Spike's "Good List"????!!!!
Anyway, isn't it ironic that they bully him because he doesn't have "magic"??!! Jokes on them, he literally does have the MOST OP Magic ( Fighting Magic) their is!!!!!!!
And that he is also part of a Yakuza Family, and when they FINALLY figure those two out.
They will all F****** REGRET IT!!!!! And beg for mercy, which they will be denied!!!!! ( Especially Gilda, Lightning Dust, those Diamond Dog Crooks, and that Teacher Bitch, and many others!!! )
Another thing, this is another "Mane Six/Seven being OOC Jerks to Spike for No Reason, thus Spike "rightfully" hates their guts"??!!
Then, WHY the Hell are they part of the "Twelve Girls that are interested in him" in the summary??!! Doesn't he hate them?! And IF they are still the "Elements of Harmony"?! Then, WHY are they "responsible for killing Spike's Mother ( Biological or Adopted )???!!!
They aren't exactly cold blooded killers or anything???!!! And some of them are FRICKIN Students and Teachers for Pete's Sake??!!
So, either Spike is probably delusional; Makes a almost petty excuse to hate them; It was a major misunderstanding/miscommunication that the Mane Six didn't really kill her, or it was a huge accident, but Spike obviously didn't know this fact??!!
Because, you basically making it so "Spike X Mane Six/Seven" DOESN'T happened in here??!! "Spike x Dazzlings" is still in the air. But, what about Starlight, and that other mysterious twelve girl??!!
Because I have counted, Mane Six ( Highly Unlikely ) + Sunset + Starlight + Dazzlings makes 11 Girls! Or you replaced the Mane Six with the Shadowbolts?!
Wonder what would Luna be in this AU there?
Curious on what she thinks of Spike in this.
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So this is meant to be a crossover?
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Actually, you’ve surprised how many stories are like that.
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Hold on, dude. It’s only the first chapter. Maybe everything will be revealed over time.
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It depends if this is luna before or after nightmare moon.
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I already know them! I mean, I did list some of the "important" ones in FIMfiction/Fanfiction/Wattpad all together.
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Touche. Personally, are you gonna keep responding to my reactions/comments from this Author's ( Dragon-In-Black ) Stories?! No Offense to it.
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You have?
Honestly, I haven’t really noticed until now.
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Yes, I have. Clearly, you didn't read the whole thing or something?! I did said it right here:
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Oh. I didn’t know those were fanfics.
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Many of them are in Fanfiction, Wattpad, and even here ( FIMfiction ).
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Ohh. I only know the ones here.
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Okay, just want to expand your views on many stories here. ( Even though I didn't like them, because they are just making a OOC Angry Mob Fest against the Main Characters!!!!!! ) 🙄 😒
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I know how you feel. I’m tracking a story like that now.
There are so many moments in this chapter that only happen just because and that just kills my immersion.
There is also some stuff that should have been explained a bit better, like the whole point system; we know that an alicorn has 35,000 points but how many points does an average person have? For all that we know they could have 34,999 points, we need a base reference to show how overpowered and cool the MC is compared to the rest of the plebs in the story.
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I do apologize, but I never saw that as important to the plot; meaning that I put it there to get it to feel as if I did build up a world with the crossover. I usually do that with information that I feel is “useless” at that part of the story, I have never understood people who wanted everything explained in one chapter? Like, that is a bit unrealistic in my opinion.