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Dash came off as too much of an asshole, here. Other than that, good setup for some sexy fun-times.

This is extremely elegantly written with eloquent and downright borderline philosophical narration indicating a much more serious situation brewing in the background. But the actual situation is so stupid that I think I had to re-read it just to make sure I wasn't seeing things.

Also never underestimate the Fujoshi archetype. Give them enough power and money and you will see them get gang-@#$% in their mansion by their personal 13 Prettyboy and Femboy Harem...
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So watch out. Twilight will have an awakening just yet. And it might look like a chapter of frigging Pandra.

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She's not the only asshole in the group right now. Just the only obvious one.

And in fairness, I wrote the thing with exaggerated personalities.

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I was gettin' Poe vibes reading this. Even the vulgarity was well written and the prose was on point.

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Which makes it so much more frustrating when it boils down to bets and drunken moronic discourse. Rainbow could have admitted ANYTHING that could have troubled her. But instead got super thirsty and behaved like a complete ass over Twilight's mom.

Why didn't anyone slap her and tell her to stop avoiding the question by being a fucking idiot?

Heh, well that deserves a facehoof, but it's still pretty funny.
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Exaggerated personalities are fine, as long as they are still recognizable and likeable enough to keep is going
Oh, and remember to not go overboard~

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Because alcohol was involved.

this has the potnetial to be super fun; cant wait for fluttershy to absolutely smoke them all lol

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Nobody is gonna guess how this goes. I promise that.