Very intrigued so far! I have to admit, I’m curious about Sexuality in this new world. It’s really the only downside I can see. Someone that doesn’t like both genders seems like they’d be ostracized a little, haha. Not being willing to fuck both of their parents and all. I’m thinking too much about porn again haha
I'm curious how you're going to play the end of the story. You keep writing it like a mystery/adventure story with the hints about trying to figure out what changed, but you made the memory rewrite so strong that they've got impressions of years worth of alternate history, and nothing shakes their absolute certainty that everything is normal, except for Celestia's belief that something changed. And even Celestia is pretty sure that it is so minor that they'll never figure it out.
The wheels of the train went thunk-thunk as it headed north and Twilight moaned and swallowed, sucking harder as the two guards rocked her between them to the beat of the table, thrusting into her throat and dripping wet pussy.
The trains in this Equestria are rocking and shifting more than in the other one. Not because they couldn't make a better suspension but because they don't want to.
As none of the other girls was coming along, Princess Celestia had insisted that she brought along some guards just to stay safe.
: "I also keep her from getting bored and reward some of my hard-working guards at the same time." : "That's why everyone loves Celestia."
Cadence looked like always, black coat and Red crystal heart with crossed cocks behind it on her flanks, her long dark pink, white and purple flowing mane and tail flowing in ethereal wind.
We know how Cadance looks like; no need to explain it in detail.
Oh my god Cadence what the hell did you do?
I'm assuming the author's been dropping hints about what's changed, and I feel dumb for still not picking up on what's supposed to be wrong here.
I'm sure it's going to be super obvious once it's revealed, but right now everything still seems perfectly normal.
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I know right, can’t wait for the reveal though. The suspense is killing me
Yup. Definitely normal and not at all concerning. Maybe Celestia's retcon detector is on the fritz.
so everything is normal here
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Seems likely at this point. I just hope Princess Cadance is able to assuage Twilight's concerns after they do their usual exchange.
Sunshine, sunshine,
Stallion cocks awake.
Pound my rump
And fuck me till I shake.
Very intrigued so far! I have to admit, I’m curious about Sexuality in this new world. It’s really the only downside I can see. Someone that doesn’t like both genders seems like they’d be ostracized a little, haha. Not being willing to fuck both of their parents and all.
I’m thinking too much about porn again haha
I'm curious how you're going to play the end of the story. You keep writing it like a mystery/adventure story with the hints about trying to figure out what changed, but you made the memory rewrite so strong that they've got impressions of years worth of alternate history, and nothing shakes their absolute certainty that everything is normal, except for Celestia's belief that something changed. And even Celestia is pretty sure that it is so minor that they'll never figure it out.
The trains in this Equestria are rocking and shifting more than in the other one.
Not because they couldn't make a better suspension but because they don't want to.
: "I also keep her from getting bored and reward some of my hard-working guards at the same time."
: "That's why everyone loves Celestia."
We know how Cadance looks like; no need to explain it in detail.