This doesn't really feel complete.
Feels more like the first chapter of a longer story

This is the whole story? It seems like this should continue, or else get a long sequel.

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Pressed the wrong option, it will continue.

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What a great start. This looks like it's going to be a lot of fun.

Intriguing but bare-bones, and there are some typos here and there. Still, it's a compelling concept. Let's see where you go with it.

Intrigued, following! Looking forward to the rest!

This can only lead to greater things, can’t wait

I need you and your friends to come to Canterlot, I fear that there might be something horribly wrong with the world. We need to find out what.

You don't say.

~Skeeter The Lurker

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IT WAS ME BARRY. I love it

So Nightmare Amore has basically turned Equestria into a casual sex world similar to Hentai Heroes...

i hope nightmare cadance wins

She dropped back down against the bed with a small sight. It had just been a nightmare… nothing had happened to the Crystal Heart. No changing to the world, changing love...
But it had felt so… real. But just a dream.

Are you sure about that?

Smiling, on her way past the market she gave Big Mac a wave where he was manning the Apple stand. He waved back, one hoof resting on Sugar Bell’s head as she slowly bobbed her head around his cock.

Well, this story starts innocent enou-... never mind.

“Hi girls,” Twilight said and sank down onto the blanket next to Rarity and sharing a quick kiss with the unicorn, lighting her horn and giving her silvery buttplug a firm grinding.

The best way to greet their friends!

Rarity pulled back, giving Spikes cock a small lick as she let go, “Did she say what?” she asked as she sat up fully.

The poor guy will get more later, right?

Good premise!
I look forward to see where it goes.