10576251 I'm imagining this has taken over some time, and considering that Midnight has become more susceptible to sexual things thanks to Cerise and the rest, it's reasonable that he'd be unable to last as long as he would've had he been grabbed in a purer state. Also because of this lore's explanation of Hyper Stallions, and so it'd be hard enough to resist the girls, but even more harder while trying to keep down his lust.
Maybe looking at this as a whole might help? He went through the Moxxi Bath Scene (Chapter 2), Sexual Illusion (Chapter 3), Second Bath Scene (Chapter 4), Cerise blowjob (Chapter 5), he's already been butter up. It would still take time for the twins to make him what they want him to be, but it will happen.
10576258 Look this Midnight is owned by Dr Sharez Jek, they have different ideas compared to what I or you would make up. As someone who's positive, they'd believe that everything will end in butterflies, but in truth it won't. Just read the rest of her stories. Or heck some of the references in this story. Shadow killed everything. Beatrix's home dimension was destroyed. So much destruction, pain, and such, all never to be undone. Scars. It wouldn't be surprising to me if it's the case that this Midnight is doomed to become corrupted since he's 'the odd one out' as Sunny said in Chapter 3. The only one not tainted by dark magic, lust, etc. It would be somewhat fitting if he became those things eventually. It's Sharaz and NotaPonyPerson's call for what happens, as they decide.
Ok? And if you need to ask these questions, PM them to me, Dr Sharaz Jek or NotaPonyPerson, but mainly Dr Sharaz or me, I don't want to have this story potentially spoiled by our conversations. Commenting of course is good, but if I were to actually explain it'd be spoiling. But then yet again it's up to Sharaz as how the comment sections work. I'm just trying to be helpful.
I love all the OCs here. Out of all the writers Dr Sharaz (and by extension you thou epic editor and artist) are one of (if not) my favorite writers! Cerise, Beatrix, Ewe, Shadow, Bellatrix, all of these dimensions, all of these worlds, I love them. You can count on me on following Dr Sharaz (+ You, since you basically do most of your work here I presume) and the stories and OCs.
10576273 Nothing unusual here, half the comments I used to get were "Will you write this character/do this fetish?" completely unrelated to the fic at hand. It's why lots of smaller authors give up.
Still, I'm grateful to anyone who at least gave my fics a fair shot, especially niche subjects like this story!
10583591 Ero Guro is a genre, so plenty disagree. In fact, a lot of horror is built on a mix of sex and violence, sometimes as a contrast. Clive Barker, one of the greatest authors I've read, has built an entire career on such.
10585434 Yeah, I think the closest bits were Shadow Scythe torturing Beatrix in what could be seen as a sexualized manner, and the twins messing around with Midnight while Shadow Scythe was doing her dismal experiments.
I like the contrast between the erotic and grotesque myself, plus it shows how demented Shadow Scythe is, judging people for their 'animal urges' when she's incredibly brutal.
NIce work! Though, I doubt they "convience" Midnight so easily
Incredible
10576239
Uhm... I think you're confusing this Midnight (Who I dub Paradise/Manor Midnight for fun) with NNN Midnight or the Midnight we RP with.
10576249
I just mean in general. Everyone one tries to resist as good as one can, wouldn't he?
10576251
I'm imagining this has taken over some time, and considering that Midnight has become more susceptible to sexual things thanks to Cerise and the rest, it's reasonable that he'd be unable to last as long as he would've had he been grabbed in a purer state. Also because of this lore's explanation of Hyper Stallions, and so it'd be hard enough to resist the girls, but even more harder while trying to keep down his lust.
Maybe looking at this as a whole might help? He went through the Moxxi Bath Scene (Chapter 2), Sexual Illusion (Chapter 3), Second Bath Scene (Chapter 4), Cerise blowjob (Chapter 5), he's already been butter up. It would still take time for the twins to make him what they want him to be, but it will happen.
10576256
Of course. I am just positive he will get saved in the end
10576239
Thank you! Combined with Midnight's innocence and being drugged, he's certainly in a vulnerable state!
10576258
Look this Midnight is owned by Dr Sharez Jek, they have different ideas compared to what I or you would make up. As someone who's positive, they'd believe that everything will end in butterflies, but in truth it won't. Just read the rest of her stories. Or heck some of the references in this story. Shadow killed everything. Beatrix's home dimension was destroyed. So much destruction, pain, and such, all never to be undone. Scars. It wouldn't be surprising to me if it's the case that this Midnight is doomed to become corrupted since he's 'the odd one out' as Sunny said in Chapter 3. The only one not tainted by dark magic, lust, etc. It would be somewhat fitting if he became those things eventually. It's Sharaz and NotaPonyPerson's call for what happens, as they decide.
Ok? And if you need to ask these questions, PM them to me, Dr Sharaz Jek or NotaPonyPerson, but mainly Dr Sharaz or me, I don't want to have this story potentially spoiled by our conversations. Commenting of course is good, but if I were to actually explain it'd be spoiling. But then yet again it's up to Sharaz as how the comment sections work. I'm just trying to be helpful.
10576266
Indeed and you're welxcome.
Keep up the good work!
10576256
Yeah, poor Midnight is being whittled down piece by piece! Cerise regrets not going all the way!
Find it interesting that it's only been me, bronycommander, dr sharaz, and notaponyperson who are commenting here lol
10576270
Oof!
Yeah she should've taken it... deeper
10576268
Just saying. I mean, hope dies last they say
10576276
If you think so. Like I said, read the other stories.
10576281
I have read such stories before, so I am aware
10576273
Welcome to the underbelly of FiM, where passionate writing for original characters is ignored in favor of canon coupling issue #45
10576291
L!
I love all the OCs here. Out of all the writers Dr Sharaz (and by extension you thou epic editor and artist) are one of (if not) my favorite writers! Cerise, Beatrix, Ewe, Shadow, Bellatrix, all of these dimensions, all of these worlds, I love them. You can count on me on following Dr Sharaz (+ You, since you basically do most of your work here I presume) and the stories and OCs.
10576273
Nothing unusual here, half the comments I used to get were "Will you write this character/do this fetish?" completely unrelated to the fic at hand. It's why lots of smaller authors give up.
Still, I'm grateful to anyone who at least gave my fics a fair shot, especially niche subjects like this story!
10576304
Well I give you a fair shot, and I'm happy about your work
A bit good, but the Gore tag fucked with it, sadly had to dislike
10582909
What's wrong with the gore? Shadow Scythe is meant to be a brutal character, so anything less wouldn't be true to her.
10583085
Gore and Clop shouldn't and can't mix
10583591
Ero Guro is a genre, so plenty disagree. In fact, a lot of horror is built on a mix of sex and violence, sometimes as a contrast. Clive Barker, one of the greatest authors I've read, has built an entire career on such.
10583591
Oh no, something didn't go along with the reader's limited taste—what a travesty on our work.
Your lost, buddy, because gore and sex go deliciously well~
10583591
Was there any real moment where Gore and Clop actually really mixed? It was either one or the other at any given moment. Eh. Your choice.
At least you gave an opinion, unlike others who just simply disliked for no apparent reason.
10585434
Yeah, I think the closest bits were Shadow Scythe torturing Beatrix in what could be seen as a sexualized manner, and the twins messing around with Midnight while Shadow Scythe was doing her dismal experiments.
I like the contrast between the erotic and grotesque myself, plus it shows how demented Shadow Scythe is, judging people for their 'animal urges' when she's incredibly brutal.
10585459
I agree