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... latest in a string of same sex celebrity marriages since Princess Celestia's endorsement of them almost a year ago. Popular DJ Vinyl Scratch, better known as DJ Pon-3 and concert cellist Octavia Philharmonica announced their wedding just last week. Veteran Wonderbolt member Soarin' has also come out recently, appearing publicly with his partner Braeburn at a press conference. According to our sources, Braeburn is a cousin of Applejack, the wife of new Wonderbolt recruit Rainbow Dash. Both of whom have graced our pages several times before as they are two of the six ponies famously responsible for defeating the nefarious villains Nightmare Moon and Discord.
Our historical analysts have confirmed that no law ever banned these same sex marriages, the practice simply seems to have fallen out of favor for around 100 years. A spokespony for the Princess said in a statement...
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Oh i just can't get enough of this parring
It's a wonderful idea to read it from both mare's perspective, and you did it very well. It had the perfect length, any shorter and i think it would have felt weak, and had it been a lot longer it might have been tiresome reading the same thing twice, but here it's was fun and great so cheers to you
The only typo i found was in chapter two where you hit B instead of M "She hugs be close"
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Her hugs be close, yo!
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In the highest amount of seriousness I can muster at any given moment, this has been yet another story that I can add to the list of Short Sweet Shipping Stories.
I'm a sucker for romance.. but only when it's done right.
Guess what: you do it right. WATCHED!
Sweet, gentle and breezy. Great to read the story from two different viewpoints. Faved, thumbed up. Keep on rocking!
Oh look. Another Vinyl/Octy pairing.
Lover's Sinfony - Michael Schenker
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Thanks for catching that! It's fixed.
Glad you like the length. That was the only thing that really had me worried.
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Word, yo.
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Thanks! Glad you liked it.
I really do like this piece, it has opened my eyes more to gays (not that i was against them)
Damn, that was awesome. Easily ranks up with some of the best stories I've read with this pairing.
Im quite impressed how you made two chapters. Each one from a point of view from Vinyl and Octavia. Awesome job!!
That is epic.
First person view from both ponies?
EPIC!
I'm glad everyone likes the two sides of the story.
At first I only had Octavia's part in mind, but when I got down to the final scene, I realized that Vinyl's feelings were only barely hinted at. So, I gave her an outlet and it looks like it paid off!
Great story
I loved this story ^^ I like this pairing pretty well and you put AppleDash in it! ^^ This was an awesome story
This was just amazing and it was very interesting on how they viewed the same events in different ways. You capture both of their personalities perfectly in the first person narration.
I did feel like both sides of the story really added up to one bigger picture (and the short epilogue was cute)
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Glad you liked the story.
I do find it kind of funny that only one of those caught your eye. Since the story is written in first person (or pony) and in a stream of consciousness style, thoughts like that are interspersed though the whole story. It wasn't in quotes precisely because she didn't say it out loud. I tried putting specific thoughts in italics at first, but it just didn't look right to me. But to each their own.
dat newspaper part at the end...prefect
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I love it! You've captured all the emotions perfectly! I can't say enough good things about your performance.
Although the audio seems to have gotten corrupted for about 4 minutes from 15:00 to 19:00. I thought it was just Chrome's flash plugin, but it did it on Firefox too, so it does seem to be the video itself.
Aaaaaaaah, !~
It was really cute! I loved it!